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Back in 1887, The Convent Of Our Lady was built, It was part of a school for girls run by grey nuns; 1971- demolish, sad that tilt, Art gallery wanted it and offered big sums. It was part of a school for girls- run by grey nuns, Reconstructed in the heart of the gallery; Art Gallery wanted it- and offered big sums, After ten years, rebuilt with skill and mastery. Reconstructed- in the heart of the gallery, Yes, all the various components stored for years; After ten years- rebuilt with skill and mastery, Oh, beautiful the interior, it brings tears. Yes- all the various components stored for years, Marble columns, windows, alter, soaring fan vaults; Oh, beautiful the interior- it brings tears, Huge open space, it would make a good place to waltz. Marble columns, windows, alter- soaring fan vaults, 1971 demolish- sad that tilt; Huge open space it would make a good place- to waltz, Back in 1887- The Covent of Our Lady was built. _________________________ March 22, 2016 Poetry/Pantoum/The Chapel Copyright Protected, ID 16-770-953-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, A Pantoum- A Poet's Choice, sponsor, Eve Roper First Place

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Date: 4/7/2016 10:38:00 AM
Hi Constance, Congratulations on your win in the contest. A wonderful write from your golden pen Constance. Your soft dream like words always bring the reader in. An excellent write. A well conceived write for Pantoum form. This has to be a seven Constance. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 4/7/2016 5:04:00 PM
Mike, thanks for the excellent, the nice comment, the congrats, and the 7, appreciate very much
Date: 4/6/2016 9:55:00 PM
Broken, Congrats on your "Pantoum --Poet's Choice Win." ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/6/2016 10:29:00 PM
Linda, thanks for the congrats !
Date: 4/5/2016 5:19:00 PM
You describe this Chapel so beautifully in you Pantoum, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your nice placement. Hugs, Sandr
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Date: 4/6/2016 9:51:00 AM
Sandra, thanks for the beautiful, the congratulations and the hugs !
Date: 4/5/2016 4:26:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 4/6/2016 10:11:00 AM
Sara, thanks for the congrats !
Date: 4/5/2016 4:57:00 AM
Great work Broken .. no wonder top podium.. big congrats!
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Date: 4/5/2016 9:05:00 AM
Upma, thanks for the compliment and the congrats !!!
Date: 4/4/2016 8:36:00 PM
Wonderful win B/W. Congratulations ...
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Date: 4/5/2016 3:00:00 AM
Charlie, thanks for the wonderful and the congratulations !!
Date: 4/4/2016 7:42:00 PM
Wonderful write, Broken Wing, congratulations on your win!!! Thank you so very much for the use of your poems. Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/5/2016 3:01:00 AM
Eve, thanks for a great contest and for my awesome placement, I am honored and you can use my poems anytime !
Date: 4/4/2016 5:53:00 PM
WOW! so amazing and educational at the same time..wonderful entry...congrats on your top placement in the contest! :)-luloo
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Date: 4/5/2016 3:03:00 AM
Laura, thanks for the wow, the amazing, wonderful and congrats !!!!
Date: 4/4/2016 4:38:00 PM
A beautifully penned pantoum many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 4/5/2016 3:03:00 AM
Jan, thanks for the beautiful, the congrats and the hugs !!!
Date: 3/24/2016 5:43:00 PM
Nicely done. The one line about the ballroom made me think of Provo's library. they have a huge room and use it for ballroom dances! but it's a newer library built on the area where the first BYU used to be!
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Date: 3/24/2016 9:14:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for visiting with the compliment, appreciate !
Date: 3/22/2016 11:51:00 PM
I once visited Salisbury Cathedral in England. Absolutely amazing architecture ... you had no choice but to stare stupidly at it all. Sad that something so historically significant was torn down ... something not right with that. Nice pantoum, Constance!
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Date: 3/23/2016 12:05:00 PM
Tim yes sad the covent was demolished but the chapel still dwells in the heart of the national art gallery of Canada, it so beautiful to visit, no picture can show that. Thanks for visiting. .
Date: 3/22/2016 8:35:00 PM
Oh yes! Am I ever glad I came back! At one time I studied Drafting and Architectural Design and these pics grabbed me and now after reading your Pantoum the beauty of your words and these pics are only made more pleasing to the eye! To read though that it was demolished is the only downer! "Leave Beautiful Things Alone!" Historically beautiful poem Broken Wings! A "10" in my book for content and substance! :-)
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Date: 3/23/2016 1:28:00 PM
Walter, it was an architectural feat for sure to put this beautiful chapel back together, actually it was a group of people who loved the history of the chapel who fought to save it and finally the gallery gave in and agreed to make it part of the gallery and now it is the heart, it took many, many years for it to become a reality, but it is awe inspiring to visit, thanks for returning to visit ~
Date: 3/22/2016 7:18:00 PM
These two photos speak volumes!
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Date: 3/22/2016 7:23:00 PM
Walter, all done now, come back, come back wherever you are !

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