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The Change

I don't know where I'm I don't know where I'm going to be Time has changed So has the people around. Reached a place far away Away from home, away from reality Where my wishes are completed My incomplete life got its meaning. Imagination leads my way Smiles that keep on coming Oh yaa I think to myself Whats for tomorrow who knows. A shattered life it was Gathered the pieces again Have decided to walk again For a miles, till I reach far away. A door of destiny Far away from failure and pain The pearls that shine Whenever I walk on that way. Maybe its the end End of all my tears The happiness that awaits In some corner of my heart. Don't know where I'm Don't know where I'm going to be Time has changed So has the people around.

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Bl Devnath

Date: 4/15/2016 7:35:00 AM

Beautiful poem my lovely friend beautifully expressed. Loved always, bl

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/3/2016 8:46:00 PM

Very impressive creation. Keep writing.......

Pratidhwani Biswal
Date: 4/4/2016 11:17:00 AM

Thank you for visiting my poems...

Anand Parmale

Date: 3/26/2016 11:00:00 PM

loved this one....Sounds like a gazal to me....Awesome awesome.....

Pratidhwani Biswal
Date: 3/26/2016 11:20:00 PM

Thank you soo much... It maybe a gazal... I am not thorough with forms of poetry... Thank you...

Skat A

Date: 3/26/2016 2:54:00 AM

Pratidhwani Biswal,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Pratidhwani Biswal
Date: 3/26/2016 3:28:00 AM

Thank you... I am from India... I have been writing poems since 3 years...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/25/2016 5:38:00 PM

If only you'd post more today, I'd come rushing to read your poetic ways....Linda

Pratidhwani Biswal
Date: 3/25/2016 10:44:00 PM

I will... Definitely...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/25/2016 1:48:00 PM

Pratidhwani, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Pratidhwani Biswal
Date: 3/25/2016 2:12:00 PM

I went through your poems... Its really filled with lots of emotion and pain... I like such kinds of poems a lot... You are a beautiful poet... Thank u for your encouraging words... It means a lot to me... About my poetic skills, I have been writing since 3 years. I love writing poems a lot. I never tried publishing them. This is the first time I tried. Hope I will learn a lot from you all... Thank you for your support.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/25/2016 1:39:00 PM

- Hey Pratidhwani - I would first wish you warm welcome to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find this page friendly and informative :) - Thanks for your first poem, I enjoy reading it :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Pratidhwani Biswal
Date: 3/25/2016 2:09:00 PM

Thank you soo much... Your poems are wonderful...