The Change

Cascading hues Fall down from the mountain ledges Quite beautiful But suddenly The rage of cold and distance is upon us Seems never to end 'Tho come this morn I awoke To the flavors and scents of new life Mercy and grace Growing in the grasses Weary faces uncreasing themselves Brooks filled with trickling delight Birds soaring heaven bound above Lonely little trees Extending their branches in embrace Let us rejoice and breathe in deeply 'Til the fragrance becomes a part of us Welcome,come quickly Spring By Deb Wilson

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/30/2014 11:26:00 AM

A pleasure to read a welcoming to spring and your first poem to the soup :)

Ralph Taylor

Date: 2/22/2012 3:01:00 PM

Congrats, Deb. Excellent piece. Enjoyed. Nice going. Best to you and yours. hugs, Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/22/2012 9:49:00 AM

congrats Deb on a lovely win for beautiful words on Spring theme luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/22/2012 5:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in ~P.D.'s~ "Spring~tease" contest Deb. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/22/2012 2:03:00 AM

Lovei it Deb Congratulations a well deserved win xx

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/22/2012 12:32:00 AM

Deb, wonderful poem, very beautiful images and written extremely well. Congrats on making PD's winners' list...............S.Ronthorpe

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2012 11:12:00 PM

DEB, .. CONGRATUALTIONS! with your wonderful SPRING poem... thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/19/2011 12:37:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful Deb, congratulations on your win ;)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/19/2011 11:41:00 AM

Congratulations on the seventh place win in the contest, Deb

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/19/2011 7:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Razzle, Dazzle" Deb. Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 4/19/2011 4:27:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful, Deb. Many congrats on your WIN. Love, Lainie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/18/2011 8:39:00 PM

Congrats Deb on your success in my contest luv.. appreciate your constant support.. my winners list is posted now to view..

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 4/12/2011 5:17:00 PM

Not a moment too soon. Still cold out. Waiting for the 80's, shorts and tee shirt days. Picturesque write. Vince

Liz Walsh

Date: 9/9/2010 10:40:00 AM

I love 'weary faces uncreasing themselves'

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/27/2010 9:00:00 AM

Congratulations on having this lovely poem featured this week. I very much enjoyed reading it and will seek out more of your poetry. Love, Joyce

John Freeman

Date: 3/25/2010 4:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your poem feature Debra. A worthy poem. Agape, Moses

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/23/2010 3:48:00 AM

You have created flowing, floating dreamy pastoral images, Debra. Congratulations on your poetry feature this week. Smiles, Dane Ann

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/22/2010 5:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Debra. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/22/2010 4:54:00 AM

Congrats on the featured poem---well done!! I am so ready my self!! Wonderfully done!!

Janette Fisher

Date: 3/21/2010 12:21:00 PM

Many congrats on your wonderful featured piece. Rgds Janette

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/19/2010 12:45:00 PM

Well the weekend is upon us and I am trying to get as many poems read as possible today as I will be gone most of the weekend from the Soup. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration Debra. Glad that spring is upon us. Love, Carol