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"The Chalice of Murdered Crows"
How many moonbeams would it take to overflow my chalice bathe me naked dew kissed diamond glistening bare skin freedom feet seeking my missing, slow dancing lover’s athamé How many sunbeams would it take to burn your see-through eyes knowing all right through my violent pounding chest pluck my stinging heartstrings like a smoking Cello pull me towards your magnetic fearless breast hear your bless’ed rising bellow, a victory call put to the test As my world turns like a spinning top thrust me through your fiery portal to rest in your heavenly arms lightening storms and thunder electric fibrillate emotions resurrect rocking gently, languid perched atop your calm ocean we are transparent ghosts of each other True Confederates A plundered treasure box overflowing with secret charms rosaries, safe passages from a book, jigsaw puzzle pieces strange treasure maps, a blunderbuss, gunpowder, snake poison and moist pearls drop divinely on your deck the wind, your breath, whispers it’s sacred balm into my ears “No need to fear, take a sip from my chalice, my dear - Secure your harbour” Rooster crows three times Light ascends within, cloaked darkness slyly turns and smiles it's out to win again La Petite Mort Moon kisses Sun and burns Chalice overflows swooning drunk on LOVE As our real world returns tangled in sheets of clean white pages Unmarked, invisible, story Murder of Black Crows in all their glory flutter feathered wings retreat approaching dawn they are seeking the Dark Star and spider webs before the early morn Keys are played silently ‘tis tattooed forever on the brain Sweet memory bleeds into right margin, Written on the body, a baby’s to be borne, to reign Love Letter sealed forever, marks a moment in the Chronicles of Wasted Time The Cuckoo The Great Pretender pretending she’s behest sits on the absent Swan Queen’s nest, while Jailbirds screech alongside their familiars Flying Monkeys banging on their chests - Like rancid oysters shucked Poe has swallowed Plath Death has put the past to rest Turns forward the hands of time in this story of twisted fate a sweet life never rhymes Two minutes past Midnight Two very distant Swans escape they are flying East not West Poe has swallowed Plath Death has put the past to rest https://youtu.be/YDBzVJCMLsw Morning Mr Magpie/Radiohead

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Date: 4/2/2020 6:47:00 PM
I came back to read this one again. Have you read "Silence: A Fable" by E.A.P.?
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 4/3/2020 2:43:00 AM
James, I very rarely come in here to comment any more. Lovely to see your comment. No I haven't, I must and I will. Thank you for that, it will keep me amused during lockdown. I have been reading up a storm, outside of the Soup, there is more to "Life" than soup...I have an extensive library here, in my home, and I also read online. I will look into the Poe fable with great interest. Stay safe with all this Covid19 drama. Trust you and yours are totally safe and well. Should you be on your own, you are never entirely on your own. Thankfully, we have more time to value life and those around us....and a lot more time to play the folly of creatives. Leanne x
Date: 6/28/2019 9:27:00 AM
This is an awesome write, i can see how it won in a contest! Love your images and wording throughout this poem....Bravo!
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 6/28/2019 9:55:00 AM
Thanks Sandra. Very kind of you. The images are important (well to me anyway in telling the stories within this profile under my own name - however, unfortunately there is a glitch in the PS system for retaining the artwork that I attach to my poems here, they continually fall out, i.e. off the page of the poem they are set to and I am forever having to upload them again and again, bit of a pain really - however, that being said, this poem, for some reason - has never lost the original artwork I attached to it, very odd). I will have to read your stories. x
Date: 4/24/2019 6:59:00 AM
https://youtu.be/iY1IM0Hsf5Q
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Date: 4/24/2019 6:54:00 AM
“Sleep, those little slices of death — how I loathe them.” Edgar Allan Poe
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 4/24/2019 6:55:00 AM
i mean, seriously Morning, is he for real? - “Never to suffer would never to have been blessed.” Edgar Allan Poe; so tired ...
Date: 4/24/2019 6:52:00 AM
hmmmm...more Poe than Poe sometimes..."“I have absolutely no pleasure in the stimulants in which I sometimes so madly indulge. It has not been in the pursuit of pleasure that I have periled life and reputation and reason. It has been the desperate attempt to escape from torturing memories, from a sense of insupportable loneliness and a dread of some strange impending doom.” Edgar Allan Poe
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 4/24/2019 6:53:00 AM
“Believe nothing you hear, and only one half that you see.” Edgar Allan Poe
Date: 4/24/2019 6:50:00 AM
:)...“I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity.” Edgar Allan Poe
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 4/24/2019 6:51:00 AM
“I was never really insane except upon occasions when my heart was touched.” Edgar Allan Poe
Date: 4/28/2018 11:24:00 AM
An exceptional write Leanne.
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 4/28/2018 6:58:00 PM
Thank you James. I have read quite a few of your poems now. I especially like your poems, "Can Still Hold You" and "Loss of Innocence".
Date: 3/15/2018 1:43:00 PM
speechless, I never read either one but YOUR incredible
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 4/3/2018 10:23:00 PM
Sorry for late reply Donna. I just came in here again to revisit the poem. Sometimes I read my poems back and think "how the heck?...." - this one I was off the page, right in the scene. Loved writing it. Glad you liked.
Date: 3/15/2018 1:28:00 PM
Yup this is amazing...knew it would win, you know what Tom was looking for and delivered...you guys have a Vulcan mind meld or something?
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 4/3/2018 10:21:00 PM
too funny. but love it. Thanks John. It was rather a cathartic moment this poem. Loved writing it. Glad you liked. :)
Date: 3/13/2018 12:08:00 AM
Leanne congratulations on this awesome win. I knew you would do it. Bravo....Maria xx
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 3/13/2018 5:19:00 PM
Maria! What a GLAMAZON....LOVE THAT PHOTO. X thank you, I think July was overtly kind and generous, of course my favourites in the comp were July and Catie Lindsey.
Date: 3/9/2018 7:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your excellent win! Eve ~`*
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 3/9/2018 11:06:00 PM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 3/9/2018 2:54:00 PM
I am completely in awe of your talent Leanne. What an amazing piece of work!! Definitely a masterpiece and so worthy of this number one spot in the contest. Congratulations!!! ~Judy
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 3/9/2018 11:07:00 PM
I think your work's very cool too Judy. x Thank you.
Date: 3/9/2018 12:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your top placement with this amazing poem, !!
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 3/9/2018 11:07:00 PM
Thanks Mike.
Date: 3/9/2018 12:12:00 PM
Nothing but superlatives for this dark beautiful imagery. Bravo on your most deserving winning poem, Leanne. Congrats.
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 3/9/2018 11:08:00 PM
Thank you Line. x
Date: 3/9/2018 11:18:00 AM
AMAZING! I bow down to your masterpiece with praise, and the number one placement is so well deserved Leanne! You certainly should take honors for this dark, but incredible poem! Congrats to you!
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 3/9/2018 11:10:00 PM
Thank you Carrie. Will have to have a read of yours. I'm a pure novice, still mastering the art of story telling. I pale in comparison to some here. Please do not bow, but thank you for the lovely compliment. x
Date: 3/9/2018 10:38:00 AM
wow! amazing metaphors and emotion, congrats well deserved top placement :)-luloo
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 3/9/2018 11:12:00 PM
Thanks Laura.
Date: 2/11/2018 4:33:00 PM
I am not really familiar with either Plath nor Poe's work Leanne, but you are excellent at this, your poetry speaks volumes.You really should enter this excellent poem in JM's contest you know. I do believe it will go really well....Maria
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 2/11/2018 4:47:00 PM
Thanks Maria. I don't know much about Poe besides his poem The Raven. Plath is an interesting character, she left too soon, it would have been interesting to see her writing mature. On with the day...
Date: 2/9/2018 6:17:00 PM
Amazing as always Leanne! Your words and thoughts are wound tightly by your continuing creativity. Finely tuned and entertaining poem to add to your list of wonderful gems you continuously share with us.
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 2/10/2018 7:35:00 AM
I've been having a few PLATH moments. lol. Some are good, some aren't. Thank you for the compliment James.
Date: 2/9/2018 4:11:00 PM
Don't get me started on Plath, July Morning....I'll go write off the page...https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sylvia_Plath
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 2/9/2018 4:21:00 PM
...Poe's ok.
Date: 2/9/2018 3:56:00 PM
http://www.english.illinois.edu/maps/poets/m_r/plath/orrinterview.htm
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 2/9/2018 4:54:00 PM
ABOUT BEES.......https://genius.com/Sylvia-plath-wintering-annotated
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 2/9/2018 4:47:00 PM
https://genius.com/Sylvia-plath-the-arrival-of-the-bee-box-annotated
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 2/9/2018 4:33:00 PM
I think I might make this my "SYLVIA PLATH" page....http://www.bbc.com/news/magazine-27377434
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 2/9/2018 4:20:00 PM
https://www.theatlantic.com/entertainment/archive/2014/10/from-the-archives-the-poems-sylvia-plath-predicted-would-make-her-famous/381946/
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 2/9/2018 4:17:00 PM
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poets/sylvia-plath
Date: 2/9/2018 3:52:00 PM
" cloaked darkness slyly turns and smiles " wonderful Leanne, a big work, thanks for sharing...
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 2/9/2018 4:02:00 PM
Thank you Charlie...there is light and dark in everything. Poe and Plath had their own personal interludes, this darkness is a character...Imagery, symbolism, or person, this will of course only relate to what the reader envisages when read. It may not be at all what the writer envisages when written. I may have to extend this story.
Date: 2/9/2018 12:49:00 PM
Are you going to enter the contest? You captured the dark nature of Poe very well, I have never read Plath so I can not comment on that... Infact I have not read Poe much either.. I Really need to read more poetry lol.
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 2/9/2018 4:05:00 PM
Plath is my favourite modern poet. Not much was thought of her work when she commenced writing. Her main competition, I think was Robert Hughes. In my mind there is no competition. I think she was/is brilliant. My favourite Plath poems are "Morning Song" and "Pursuit"...however, I think they're all intricate/complex and reveal a lot about the woman and her life. I wonder what her daughter thought of her stories? Of course, Sylvia departed way too early from her own story.
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 2/9/2018 3:32:00 PM
Silent, I find that incredibly hard to believe, I think you are being very kind. As for reading more poetry....it's one of the better addictions to have in life. x
Date: 2/9/2018 11:40:00 AM
Love is the constant star the bridge to be crossed and shared not broken to drift away with the raging currents that scar the land...my first thought after reading
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/9/2018 6:06:00 PM
now that I think about it the bridge part may have come from a sonnet I wrote years ago...the first line was...I have crossed the narrow bridge to your heart...like a sparrow small in a turbulent storm...but then again it may be amygdala
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/9/2018 5:59:00 PM
no dear poet they are what I said they were...my first thought after reading...If a poem touches me in a certain way my reply to whomever the poet, is some manner of poetic verse as a salute to their skill...so search no more I am the author
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 2/9/2018 3:46:00 PM
You must let me know where those words are from, it's eating me up now! lol...are they yours Frederic? In my search this morning, for the full story of those words .... I came across this writer, who is more than likely not the originator, but she has me hooked nevertheless. I have commenced reading. Thought it may be of interest. http://capa.conncoll.edu/gioseffi.ww&wf.html
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 2/9/2018 3:35:00 PM
I haven't quite worked out where those wonderful words originate from, perhaps they are from your own seat of the amygdala...will get back to you with a thoughtful comment in due course. Thank you Frederic. I will be back.
Date: 2/9/2018 8:53:00 AM
Your talent is superb... Fantastic poetry
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 2/9/2018 3:36:00 PM
I just love writing my stories Arturo. I don't know about superb, I may be getting a little better. Practice makes perfect. Thank you for reading and for your very kind comment. :)
Date: 2/8/2018 10:02:00 PM
Awesome poem, Leanne. A masterful piece. Love its depth and darkness.
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 2/9/2018 3:38:00 PM
Thank you Line. I haven't been into your poems for a while - my laptop is on the fritz, i.e. on the way out, what an horrendous thought for someone who's addicted to writing stories...I will venture forth and read your poems today. :)
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