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The Cemetery

~~ I entered gates that were rusty and old, worn with age, This eternal resting place filled my soul with sadness; The time of the year did not help, barren trees hanging low, Dried up withered flowers lay forlorn on rows of graves. I followed a pathway taking me deep into the maze of sorrow, Many stones difficult to read, erosion and time destroyed; Some were simple crosses and others pristine granite markers, I crossed over a bridge above a rippling stream. Dark valleys lay before me and toppled statues rest in peace, This scene of sadness holds a place in my soul forever; For among the burial plots, vaults, crypts lays a beloved memory, Of my childhood cat, Snowball, forever in this place. This pet cemetery, serene and tranquil, And I still weep . . . _______________________ March 21, 2014 Poetry/Verse/The Cemetery Copyright Protected, ID 03-551-833-21 All Rights Reserved, 2014, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, The Saddest Landscape sponsor Skat, 03/2014 Second Place

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Date: 5/22/2014 9:22:00 PM
You have such a great flow, and this piece shows it. TFS :) Jess
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Date: 4/9/2014 9:51:00 PM
BROKEN, CONGRATULATIONS....SKAT
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Constance La France
Date: 4/12/2014 9:34:00 AM
Thank you Skat
Date: 3/23/2014 2:20:00 PM
Just love this, Constance, and such a moving end. Hope you and the kitties are having a good weekend x
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Constance La France
Date: 4/12/2014 9:38:00 AM
Thank you Jack
Date: 3/22/2014 8:51:00 AM
That was quite a surprise at the end. A very effective piece.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/12/2014 9:41:00 AM
Thank you Richard.
Date: 3/22/2014 7:26:00 AM
So well described...vivid pictures. Sad, as well. // my cat Snowball passed away 2 years ago! // paul
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Constance La France
Date: 4/12/2014 9:41:00 AM
Thank you Paul
Date: 3/22/2014 6:50:00 AM
Stunning images of sadness. The last line stating the cemetery is a tranquil place greatly highlights the fact that dark sadness of the landscape is your perceptions coming from your place of loss. Brilliant poetic gem.
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Date: 3/22/2014 1:09:00 AM
You painted a very personal portrait of a sad landscape. I bet you had many cats in your lifetime. I love that about you. How you enjoy your cats as much as I do mine. I sure enjoyed this one about Snowball and his resting place.
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Date: 3/21/2014 9:43:00 PM
There is always sadness whenever you go into any cemetery! You have expressed yourself masterfully within this illustrious poem my friend! I surely loved this piece! great Work!!
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Date: 3/21/2014 12:37:00 PM
This is definitely a very sad landscape. You captured the theme well with your descriptive words! Very well done. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/21/2014 12:12:00 PM
I can't imagine of a sadder landscape than this... ;'(( you painted a scene so well... the dried flowers,toppled statues.. and the memories of those beloveds sleep in death... you penned it so well , Lady.. :')) kudos!! ^^__^^
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 4/10/2014 7:43:00 AM
glad to be here once again... and now to give you a warmest CONGRATULATIONS!!!! :O)) great job!!! ^_^

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