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The Cat Burglar and the Monk

Scaling the walls outside Like an agile athlete Prayers is going out For the sinners, the needy And just as the demons retreat A sudden drop of cold sweat Rush down the monk's forehead For a faint sound of a window pane Falling to the floor in splinters The last syllable paused To a sound so sinister In the dead of night Two eyes meet It was love at first sight The jewel the thief stole Was the monk's heart Incidents like this makes Many relate to fate For the monk love boosted his faith As for the cat burglar She found love and salvation Love is divine She couldn't help but tarried In a few months wedding bells rang Who would have thought An unusual union Love is no respecter of persons

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Date: 9/18/2019 11:41:00 PM
A brilliant unusual imaginary tale with a lovely ending, very uplifting . . . ; )
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Date: 9/23/2019 5:16:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 9/12/2019 6:56:00 AM
It seeks most of your writing is free verse. I do love the way you write!
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Date: 9/12/2019 11:59:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 9/10/2019 2:44:00 AM
"Two eyes meet It was love at first sight" in many poems this would not have worked at all. In your poem, it is PERFECT.
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Date: 9/10/2019 1:49:00 PM
Hi Caren I try experimental verses with stories I knew about like the owl and the pussycat.
Date: 9/8/2019 9:26:00 AM
Clever and unusual top - a monk and a thief getting married - creative my friend. Hugs, jennifer.
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Date: 9/8/2019 9:54:00 AM
It was really inspired by The owl and the pussy cat thanks for your comment.

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