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The Castle

There is a castle standing still. Where blood was shed to protect our free will. When foreign foes dared trespass, we kicked their ass. There is castle standing still. Where wine flowed free and pigs were killed. To celebrate our victory. Music and dance all night long. Loud bursts of song. There is a castle standing still. Named Dun na nGall. Where Maeve was thrilled to wed the high chief Fegal. Ulster and Connacht united as one. Slan agus beannacht. There is a castle standing still. Not derelict or overgrown. Where visitors can mill. See steps worn down by passing feet. Soldiers on the beat. Forever now asleep.

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Date: 5/1/2016 5:52:00 PM
Jean, Congratulations on your castle on a hill win... love Linda
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Jean Murray
Date: 5/1/2016 6:13:00 PM
As always, thank you Linda.
Date: 5/1/2016 3:40:00 AM
Well written congrats xxxx
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Jean Murray
Date: 5/1/2016 3:51:00 AM
Thank you Wendy.
Date: 4/27/2016 1:04:00 PM
Congrats on your win with placement my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/27/2016 4:09:00 PM
Thank you BL. There are loads of castles in Ireland and our folklore is rich with them.
Date: 4/27/2016 12:44:00 PM
Congratulations Jean on the placement of the contest.
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/27/2016 4:08:00 PM
Thank you Nayda. It's always thrilling to win a placement.
Date: 4/20/2016 5:09:00 PM
i like this poem very much, jean (especially the "kicked their ass" line!). i have to travel very far to get to see a castle and once went on a vacation with my son (he was in high school) to scotland and wales just to see castles. we both loved that trip...
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Date: 4/20/2016 5:30:00 PM
I did 1,000 miles in Scotland once Ilene. They have some beautiful ones there. Glad to know you liked my kicking ass castle.
Date: 4/20/2016 3:01:00 PM
- Great written, Jean - Good luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/20/2016 3:27:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lise.

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