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A bright painted fawn she choose Face aglow, roses lightening dawn The reds, the yellows and the blues On the bright painted fawn All around the spirals and bon bon Frilly frocks and bright red shoes Streets lined with dew filled lawn The carnival in all its hues Eyes closed mind in a swoon She laughed her pain, a perfect ruse On the bright painted fawn 08/08/13 By- Tahera Mannan For Nette’s ‘Carousel in Roundel’ contest.

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Date: 5/21/2017 12:24:00 AM
Very nice, To me, this reminds me of a marriage ceremony. 7 for sure :)
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Date: 2/21/2016 1:58:00 PM
always a fan. LINDA
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Date: 9/27/2015 11:54:00 AM
This is very beautiful Tahera :)
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Date: 8/31/2013 9:40:00 PM
Tahera, , Congratulations :-) on having your poem Featured on the soups Home Page... always~ Linda
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Date: 8/28/2013 7:17:00 PM
Congrats on your poem being featured
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Date: 8/20/2013 9:02:00 PM
Tahera, congrats in the CAROUSEL IN ROUNDEL ..contest...SKAT
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Date: 8/20/2013 4:45:00 PM
I sure like this one...congrats on your win, I would have placed it higher. BG
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Date: 8/20/2013 4:26:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your winnning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 8/20/2013 1:35:00 PM
Love it Tahera!Congrats on your win in the contest.
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Date: 8/20/2013 8:29:00 AM
This is such a pretty piece, congratulations
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Date: 8/19/2013 7:49:00 PM
i learn something new thanks Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Date: 8/19/2013 4:42:00 PM
Tahera, Thanks for the wonderful "CAROUSEL" ride.... Congratulations with your winning poem in Nette's contest. always & forever *PD :-)
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Date: 8/19/2013 3:08:00 PM
this is so sweet and colorful. And I like the idea of her ride being a fawn. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/16/2013 10:44:00 AM
this is amazing Tahera, beautiful, and very inspiring...
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Tahera Mannan
Date: 8/16/2013 10:38:00 PM
Thanks harry.

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