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The Carnival

The beats so alive Her mind found no rest "Motion", it seemed to screamed Duluduudotuu, doodotu, duludootu, hit the dramers Even her head moved in response The crowd anxious with lit faces Right foot first, back tilted with face forward- the show had began Yeeeeeeee, wululuuuuu, yeeeyee, yeeye, clapping and jumping Was all you could hear anticipatively the crowd celebrated her Even the beads on her feet shook cheerfully Lower limb straight Her backside shaked vigorously The waist seemed boneless as it did the job easily Duluduudottu, doodotu, duludootu- smiles everywhere some even imitating her moves She was enjoying herself, cheers almost deafening, she kept on Swinging shoulders left, right, front and back She was alive, and the crowd? "What can one say" Happily watching.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/21/2016 12:48:00 AM
i don't know why it soUnds wicked... skat
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Date: 5/19/2016 1:30:00 PM
I don't get it, but i understand the first like. I think this falls under the I don't know form. :) LINDA
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