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Two unlocked cars in the lot looked good, And sorry I could not steal them both And be one felon, at length I stood Looking at both as long as I could. To leave one behind I was quite loath. A coin toss guided me. I took The red one (I hoped) the better car Because it was newer. One last look At the other. It was time to hook My new ride up, then vamoose afar. The car not taken, no keys in sight, was a beauty in metallic black. I thought I'd sneak back that same night And hot wire this vision of delight But--Darn it!--I never made it back. I'm telling my story with a sigh And have told it sadly ever since. Two unlocked cars looked good, and I Took the bright red one but now see why, To me, in jail, it's made NO difference! a parody of Robert Frost's "The Road Not Taken" entered in the Seeker's In the Style of My Favorite Poet Contest on August 15, 2016 Date: December 18, 2020 Contest Title: Parody of a Famous Poem Placed 1st Sponsor: L. Milton Hankins

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Date: 1/10/2021 3:41:00 PM
LOL! Too funny!
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Date: 1/9/2021 10:06:00 PM
Wonderful parody, Janice! Congrats on your deserving first place in Milton's contest with this amusing parody of one of my Frost favorites. ~ John
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Date: 1/9/2021 10:36:00 AM
You stole the car and the best prize with this one! Congrats on your win and I particularly like the last stanza!
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Date: 1/9/2021 7:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Great picture with your fun write. Enjoy your win and weekend with blessings...................
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Date: 1/8/2021 6:49:00 PM
Janice, the competition was the stiffest I have seen in any of my contests. I had fifty winners, but I culled out the top ten and guess who was at the top??? You really deserve these accolades. Well done!
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Date: 1/8/2021 4:14:00 PM
very creative indeed Janice many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/15/2016 11:52:00 PM
Very creative with great humor, Janice! Loved it :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/16/2016 1:00:00 AM
Thanks so much, Laura! Janice
Date: 8/15/2016 8:51:00 PM
Janice, you did a great job on this parody! I enjoyed it! Blessings!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/15/2016 10:24:00 PM
Thanks so much, Kim! Janice
Date: 8/15/2016 5:58:00 PM
This is good. I like it, particularly because my husband has two Vettes - a red one and a black one. But neither is ever left unlocked except inside the closed garage. Cool write.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/15/2016 10:28:00 PM
Thanks so much, Beverly! Janice

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