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The Cancer Industry

here in our country, people suffer in cancer. it's industrial prism. no one can't get away. one has hired just last year, then see what it'll turn. after three trimesters, a new life will appear. this pandemic illness. of somebody's flesh. cling to one another's, set an immoral quest. this world has carried over, with the hand of a beasts. and he who obeys him, will taste the sweetness of defeat. single or married women, can be fell on this trap. inside the cave of a lion, all its wanted is lust. people using people, rulers must play their role. to stop filling the bowl of trash. Aiyah_025 philosophical Entry poem for :Giorgio V.'s Impress me with a small poem V (Yay) ** 2nd Place Winner**

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Date: 5/6/2014 2:05:00 PM
very intersting poem on kanser, AiyaH. Written in beautiful English. *sigh* I wish I could pen stuff like this. There is a book 'The Cancer Industry' BTW. Very interesting.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/6/2014 2:50:00 PM
But you can go beyond your limitation... just don't quit trying and learning the tools... you can ask the help from our PRO poets here in site... most of them are willing to guide you... Just count on them... even I can help you, but I doubt if I can educate you well.. lol... again, thanks a lot!!! :O))
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/6/2014 2:49:00 PM
really Ivo?! ..I haven't read that book.. I just got the title based on my own interpretation w/ the system I'm involved at... Thank you for this wonderful comment, my friend... English is also my second language, and to tell you honestly... my english is really bad!!.. I have a hard time familiarizing w/ the proper grammar, phrasings and correct verb agreement...
Date: 3/20/2014 5:09:00 AM
Well penned write and congratulations on the fine win, aiyah
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/20/2014 7:45:00 AM
Dr. Ram... Thank you so mucH!!! ..i appreciate your visit :')) oxox
Date: 3/20/2014 4:17:00 AM
- Me :))) - Congratulations on your win in the contest sponsored by Giorgio A.V. - A wonderful win poem from you AiyaH ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/20/2014 7:37:00 AM
Oh my dearest Anne Lise... thaNk you for the unstoppable congratulations!!! .. I love you so mucH!! ...Thanks a Lot!!! ..here's the hugssss...(^_^)
Date: 3/20/2014 1:03:00 AM
Aiyah, Congrats, awesome win! ~SKAT~
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/20/2014 7:32:00 AM
Hey sexy...nice to see you again..^_6... Ooooh that avatar... I'm envy so much.. hehe .. :')) tHanK you for commenting... love lots!!! ... ^__^
Date: 3/20/2014 12:55:00 AM
A really deep and moving poem. Congrats Aiyah! ^_^
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/20/2014 7:26:00 AM
WheW.. Teddy.. thank you for commenting !!... I appreciate your visit so much.. :'))
Date: 3/19/2014 10:59:00 PM
Hi Aiyah, Impressive like the themes. Congratulations on your win. :) Love ~LINDA
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 3/20/2014 7:24:00 AM
Oh my dearest Linda... I'm so happy to see your comment on my poem... your words are like torch lighting my path in poetry.. :')) Thanks for the love and support!! ^__^ ...always loves you, AiyaH :O))
Date: 2/27/2014 1:32:00 PM
Napakalakas na tula. Maganda Salamat. Daz
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 2/27/2014 1:49:00 PM
wow!!! ..ang angas ng komento, makata..haha.. i liked it!! ..salamat! ..:) ..now we're MANY!!! ..
Date: 2/27/2014 11:15:00 AM
now this one is incredible, aiyah... it pierces my heart knowing how low we can go dito sa atin.. but hope springs eternal.. amazing write... p-noy should read this.. huggs!
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 2/27/2014 12:36:00 PM
and IF we only have an options... but we are just living in reality...we need to be enslaved of this system...serve other countries, swallow every profane language that will come out from their mouths, stay awake, and accept all the pressure and stress from the management,.etc.. etc!!! .lol ...this world is really amazing.. ^_^
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 2/27/2014 12:35:00 PM
nette...(goosebumps!)... your comment made me rejoice!! ..he he.. i didn't expect that it'll touch your heart.. :0) ..indeed, its a hard job! ...it takes somebody to have "long thread".. (mahabang-pisi)....
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 2/27/2014 11:18:00 AM
how hard to work esp during graveyard shifts!...
Date: 2/27/2014 11:09:00 AM
The people getting the calls are not very happy campers with the calls as well..I think that the call centers that are using the phone lines to try to sell is very annoying..If a person wants to buy something, they will search it out and find what they want..If it is for service or repair now that is different..There is a need for that in our country so that we can speak to someone who speaks English..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 2/27/2014 2:42:00 PM
as Donna Summer sings...." we work hard for the money...TONIGHT!!!!! .." ..^__^...
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 2/27/2014 12:48:00 PM
Sara... thank you for reading my poem...it's my pleasure to have your comment... you were right!... it is really annoying...(i'm glad i'm not part of costumer service acct..lol..)...somehow, i think we're useful in some ways... but too bad that we have a hard times of familiarizing foreign accents... :')) Thank you!! ^__^..
Date: 2/26/2014 11:42:00 AM
Hello Aiyah, what you say here sure intrigues me-- I do agree with that metaphor of how there is cancer crippling our country-- I'm just not too sure with what your title could mean? Are you referring to the call center industry as the cancer? I am not too sure of that view though, this industry has its pros & cons, but I think it has contributed much to the economy.... So much to be said about the cancer in our country, but more importantly needs to be done. Thanks for passing by my poem btw!
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 2/27/2014 3:20:00 PM
it's been a year and 5 mos. now ,Darling...and i'm too glad to strive each night! ....
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 2/27/2014 8:09:00 AM
you made me happy with your comment today...^_^ ..i feel like this world has became smaller...especially ,knowing that i can interact with my own 'kababayan' ...i hope to now you more ,Nikko ;') ...time to take calls now! ..^__^...ooops...I must be watchful...once my boss catch me...that'll be a new subject of my poem..titled..TERMINATION..haha ...
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Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 2/26/2014 12:30:00 PM
Thank you for your explanation, Aiyah! I also worked at a call center, lasted only 4 months but it was somewhat of an eye opener for me-- I agree though, with the illnesses that goes along with it, literally and metaphorically speaking. Keep on writing! tulog na! --nikko :)
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 2/26/2014 12:12:00 PM
----))) i'm not referring to an industry itself...but the illness which people suffer inside of it..------(((
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 2/26/2014 12:09:00 PM
oh.. Niko...it's my pleasure to have your comment on my poem!! ..^__^ ...i just wrote a poem in particular with "call center industry"..cos this is where i'm working at.. ^_6...this is just a fruit of my wild imagination and observation based on what people around me portrays as the days go by.. ;')) ...thank you so much for dropping in...i appreciate it so mucH!!! ..oxoxox huggs
Date: 2/25/2014 4:50:00 PM
† This Is Where A Consorted Effort To Overturn Their Tides Through Time Shall Need Come Into Play, Sweet Beautiful Aiyah ˜ "Omnium Gatherum" ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, John
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 2/26/2014 12:10:00 PM
Thank you ,Johnny... :")) ..

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