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The Call

She called tonight Says I’m am out of here Won’t be home Goodbye my dear Her love has died I shed a tear I have lost my love Goodbye my dear Another tear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/8/2013 9:02:00 PM
Nicely Done Donald
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Date: 12/6/2013 10:39:00 PM
Man was made to love eternally hence it's always sad when love perish. Good one.
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Date: 12/5/2013 4:44:00 AM
Great stuff, man.
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Date: 11/18/2013 10:54:00 AM
This is the emptiness that pulls a hole into one's heart that can never be completely filled. Very expressive.
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Date: 10/7/2013 10:36:00 PM
Heartfelt write Donald. ... every closed door opens another one ey?
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Date: 10/5/2013 8:24:00 AM
Indeed a sad goodbye. Nice one, Donald. Licia :-)
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Date: 10/4/2013 8:55:00 PM
every hi is followed with goodbye, thank you Donald ,its nicely done,Ivy
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Date: 10/4/2013 8:19:00 PM
Hello Donald, a sad goodbye... it is... Linda
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