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The California Condor

Ten thousand years ago he roamed free He was king of the sky on both coasts Now his kind is just clinging to life Only about 160 birds left to boast Lead poisoning led to his decline That, and the predation of man Now, sadly, he's raised in a cage Protected as much as we can With a wing span of up to 9 feet His bald head seems far to small But in flight he's quite spectacular For in the air he's not ugly at all Each little egg is a treasure As we try to hold on to the past We try to play surrogate mother In hopes their species will last..........
The centering instruction "kinda" worked...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/4/2010 9:11:00 AM
Awesome wing span this delightful bird has Barbara. It's tragic that so few are left, many congratulations on your win in Amy's contest >> James
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Date: 6/3/2010 9:25:00 PM
Just let me add my congratulations on this fine poem being in the winners' circle, Barbara. I love it! Regards from your fellow LNC, Carolyn
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Date: 6/3/2010 2:40:00 PM
Not a pretty bird, but a grand and majestic one. And, thank God- back on the rise in populations. Awesome write and I enjoyed it and the info. Thanks for entering and congrats.
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Date: 6/3/2010 2:10:00 PM
A beautiful bird BG and a beautiful win for u today in Amy's contest.. enjoy another victory dance please... lets fly ... with luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 6/3/2010 1:58:00 PM
Congrats on your win in Amy's contest Barbara.....I enjoyed it when I first read it and still do.......Larry
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Date: 5/26/2010 5:39:00 PM
A fine tribute to a majestic bird.
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Date: 5/26/2010 4:04:00 PM
Sad about the condor. I built a model airplane called the Condor when I was a kid. Loved it because the wings were so long. What will we have in another 100 years?...worms and beetles. Love, daver
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Date: 5/26/2010 2:02:00 PM
What a wonderful poem about our native, Californian wildlife!! Great poem, Barbara...this should do well in the contest!!
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Date: 5/26/2010 9:53:00 AM
Wow, a nine-foot wing span and freedom to soar the skies. Guess the only thing about the California Condor I don't envy is the way its future has been placed in jeopardy. Love the rhyme, meter and information provided in this powerful poem, fellow LNC. Best to you in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/26/2010 9:18:00 AM
Great Write Barbara.....How come my mother-in-law won't go extinct?.....Larry
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Date: 5/26/2010 9:05:00 AM
Good work my friend... Center alignment is rather difficult here, I run into this problem often with my variety of forms.....:JP}
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