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The Butterfly Cocooned

The Butterfly Cocooned Noon Beneath higher twig tips, my heart flutters Near converging branches. My cocoon Rests Mid-high the strength and distinctive character Of a gnarly tree. Embracing me. This, my home…Cocoon. Night. This essential place, Protecting Above the swirling world, Puzzling with its mixing motions Of lights, colors, temperatures, Until I think I shall just stay In this cocoon For all the days of my brief forever. I have grown able To feel my heart flitter, And my future hinting of more. Secure herein my cocoon, I debate with Life… Staying here within, Cocooned Perhaps until I might learn For its own brief time and purpose, How each raindrop so proudly falls. ———————————————————————————————————————— (c) sally young eslinger 3/1/23 ***written in response to my time with medical Specialist & his presxribed treatment and diagnosis. Thanks be to God…

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Jasen Ridley

Date: 9/8/2023 5:31:00 AM

I really enjoyed this very descriptive and unique. Great writing style

Timothy Ray

Date: 5/19/2023 4:24:00 PM

i simply loved this, such a simple and thoughtful treat on an inward trek evaluating each step with care and introspection....absolutely a wonderful read Sally....take a bow

Susan Lawrence

Date: 4/24/2023 8:28:00 AM

Spiritual inward journey with nuances of beauty, safety and introspection dear Sally. I loved ~ For all the days of my brief forever . Loved the last line as well . Blessings to you on your continued journey through health and life . I hope you are feeling better . Hugs, Susan :)

Clifford Villalon

Date: 3/22/2023 7:46:00 PM

Glad to see and read your new poems Miss Sally! Take care always! :) Cliff

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/17/2023 8:25:00 AM

As always, your lines are so touching and layered in meaning, my own mother is in assisted living now and this makes me think of her, I especially love the lines 'For all the days/of my brief forever' and 'mid high the strength/and distictive character/of a gnarly tree' - I feel I could write an entire essay on this! Will fave this for future contemplation~

Valsa George

Date: 3/10/2023 6:34:00 AM

Never knew you were sick. Reading the comments below, I understand what you mean by cocooned ! Hope it is a temporary state. Pray you break the cocoon at the earliest and emerge once again as a butterfly. My prayers, dear poet friend.

Joe Dimino

Date: 3/3/2023 5:17:00 AM

Magnificent poetry! An immortal cocoon of verse, a butterfly of inspiration for every fluttering writer. Can't really complement this work enough. Blessings, hoping you are feeling stronger. Oh, A FAVE!

Sally Eslinger
Date: 3/3/2023 7:37:00 PM

Dear Joe! Fabulous to see you tonight. Strength is my biggest struggle right now, physical pain is my biggest battle, with my Guardian Angel, St. Michael, & Christ thankfully, blessedly, with Jim, you & Soupers so belief-filled by me. Thank you. I do belicve tha butterfly will break out free.hugs

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 3/2/2023 7:52:00 PM

Incredible Sally, and I lift prayers for your health, be well <3

Sally Eslinger
Date: 3/3/2023 7:40:00 PM

Thank you! Thank you! We are side by side. God bless you & continue to comfort you! My big hugs here for you, sally

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/2/2023 7:23:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your metaphorical work. Thanks for sharing with us and for dropping by my page. I hope that your health continues to improve under your circumstances. Sara

Sally Eslinger
Date: 3/3/2023 7:43:00 PM

Sara, thank you for your comment, friendship, and well wishes. It is, honestly, quite a pleasure to visit you poetry. Take care. May The Muse Be awith You!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/2/2023 1:04:00 AM

Lovely poem though I can feel the worry of sickness. Keep strong.

Sally Eslinger
Date: 3/2/2023 4:04:00 AM

Victor! Yes, you were right on in feel of this penning. Thank you! Huge hugs. sally

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/1/2023 3:30:00 PM

Stay safe and take care of yourself, Sally. I hear the turmoil you convey and safety you feel being at home in your familiar environment. A touching write. Blessings!

Sally Eslinger
Date: 3/2/2023 4:23:00 AM

Thanks for your compassionate take on this poem and words of support. xoxo