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I love butterflies.. :)

THE BUTTERFLY AND ME Venus butterflies tiptoe upon roses rise playful in pirouette, they tango with the singing voice of a clarinet... Wouldn't this view capture your eyes? Swarm of honey fragrance fans my cheeks and so my hair, I turn around and see a butterfly so flair. I run, run run to chase such butterfly with care but pity, I missed so I just stand and stare... Kissing now, the curves and swells of the hibiscus is a butterfly that dance in ballet hush, tickling the petals, oh! they bend and blush-- won't these two wonders make a sublime meniscus? Tomorrow morning, Do gaze at a butterfly say hello or wave a hi colorful they are but they only live for awhile Blessed, we are given years to live by but as colorful as how butterfly paints the sky Do we also brush the whole world with a rainbow smile? _____________________________________________________________ © O.E. Guillermo 09:57 pm, January30, 2015

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Skat A

Date: 8/13/2015 1:23:00 AM

OLIVE, Congratulations on your win. SKAT LOVE

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/13/2015 1:03:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning write Olive!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/12/2015 5:14:00 PM

Olive, Congratulations on your "Any Poem #33" contest win. Thank you for the support. Stop by my latest blog. **A Good Read** if you'd like or have time... Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Julia Ward

Date: 3/20/2015 10:23:00 AM

Dear Olive, I am very impressed with your butterfly poem: it's as as light as air... Well done! Hugs, Julia, xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/2/2015 3:50:00 AM

Thank you Julia for stopping by.. :)! hugs back.. :)!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/31/2015 7:41:00 PM

well you do Olive [brush the whole world with a rainbow smile?]How are you little one? Light & Love

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/2/2015 9:40:00 PM

I am alright Debbie.. :) just alright.. :)! hope you are doing okei too.. :) God bless us all.. :) hugs and hugs and yes light and love be upon us all.. :) In Jesus NAme, amen. :)

James Fraser

Date: 1/31/2015 6:30:00 AM

This poem is delightful Olive. I love the way you've colored them with such aplomb. Love the way you write :) I love butterflies, the erratic way they fly makes me smile. They are wonderful to write about, and I have done so, even writing Dark Poetry about them, James :) xx :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/2/2015 9:39:00 PM

Yes I have read some of your poems regarding butterflies James and I like them as well.. :)! weeeeeeeeee the world its just full of beautiful creations esp nature that invites my muse to write about them sometime.. :)!

David Meade

Date: 1/30/2015 6:07:00 PM

Though the time is short the color and dance is supreme . . . you and the butterfly . . . sweet is this image. 7

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/2/2015 9:37:00 PM

Thanks much David.. :)! i welcome your comments on my poem.. :) God bless us all.. :)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/30/2015 4:11:00 PM

wow wow wow Olive this is simply divine the image and the imagery - the final stanza is simply sublime - will aim to paint the world with a rainbow smile- a 7 and faves:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/2/2015 9:36:00 PM

Thank you Jan.. :) I appreciate your drop by in my humble poetry.. :)! Yes we should all aim to paint the world with a rainbow smile.. :)!

Paul Callus

Date: 1/30/2015 1:09:00 PM

I love this beautiful poem, Olive_eloi!! and the rhyme is so lovely. The ending message too is as delightful as the butterflies that you so excellently describe. Well done!!! hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/2/2015 9:34:00 PM

Thanks so much Paul.. :)! I somehow see myself like a butterfly.. :)! and I love them..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/30/2015 8:52:00 AM

- Oh ... Olive this is so sweet and lovely - dance ballet with butterflies ... airy and light you are dancing (7) - Have a nice weekend :) - Rainbow smile // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/31/2015 4:28:00 AM

thanks much Anne Lise.. :) I was inspired by my other poem about butterflies: fly free and high butterfly,, :)! hugs and hugs

Earl Schumacker

Date: 1/30/2015 8:52:00 AM

Hi Olive, You have great language skills. This is stunning in its simplicity. I imagine this piece in a free verse form also. I think you could make it a masterpiece. Great job. Keep up the good work. I rated it a 7. Earl

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/31/2015 8:32:00 AM

thanks so much Earl.. :) I appreciate your every drop by.. :) Aha I really don't know that I have but I thank you.. All i know is that am trying and learning .. :)!!! take care and Blessings to you always.. :)!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/30/2015 8:52:00 AM

+ sorry a 7 !!!!