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The Butterfly

Enroling you a worm (cumbersome and) hairy, you- scimitar of leaves Knows the pain ,writhing pupae Abandoned and convicted Constricted hanging straightjacket Squirming like a jackrabbit Gagged nocturnally - blindfold humility Rejected by those mocking moths and jealously believing left the key Both found our grace on bended knees ..left there dangling from a tree.. Unhinge now those spinakers of glory Pretty - flaky- flinder Streaked in splatters paint Dust of the fairies Gaze at me with criss-cross eyes Innocent beauty oh ye butterfly Spiny antennae, stretching out transmitters Taking flight so easily Flitting off with no goodbyes To a newer afternoon over there Dashing in the sun Kneeding and gouging all those zinnias Joy! Slurping up the nectar Whisky! Tequila! Brandy and Champagne! Swops them for a chorus of pansies Dancing blooming flowers Crazy blessed colours Bouncing delight.- erratic in flight Dodging in between the bees O enchanted mystic butterfly Only pausing for a while Hold me in your spell For you walked that crooked mile Linger in this dream So seldom comes to see Just as you, my timepiece too Is coiled in spring A dustpuff within the wind Specked all over pollen confetti Envied now by every moth Suicidal circle - one kamikaze candle Seared and singed and slowly fried Getting what theyre vetted for But the sun his laughing in his sky Beseeching all the yet to open flowers Awake !Awake! An angel is coming by

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Date: 10/11/2019 8:04:00 PM
A simple translation ( allegory ). --- I think of another left hanging on a tree whose transformation awakens countless flowers- whose beauty replaces the fear in our hearts with love. --- Until science can elucidate the wellspring of hope in man, we are condemned to rejoice in His spirit.
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 10/28/2019 2:05:00 PM
Hi Robert, Thank you so much for your input and so eloquently replied. Indeed!.I tried to introduce it into this work with only a subtle hint. Only a person deep in wisdom will know the depth and scope of that Great Victory.
Date: 2/21/2019 7:51:00 PM
There is some gorgeous imagery in your poem, Jannie. The ending of this is pure delight!
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 10/28/2019 2:06:00 PM
Thank you sweet lady. By the way, nice new pic of you, in fact- gorgeous.
Date: 2/21/2019 7:49:00 PM
Hi, Jannie, gosh I asked another Soup poet from South africa about that matter you told me. And they acted like they did not know what I was talking about. Is it more a regional problem? It sure must be very scary for you. Let me read your poem now.
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Date: 9/27/2018 12:31:00 PM
Beautifully crafted. Well done. I truly enjoyed this.
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Date: 5/16/2018 12:22:00 PM
Amazing, thanks for directing me to this piece. You put a lot of thought into this poem.
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Date: 5/10/2018 7:34:00 AM
Hi Jannie, I love butterflies and this beautiful piece is such a wonderful tribute to these amazing creatures! Outstanding imagery, my friend! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 5/7/2018 12:37:00 AM
I like your fabulous poetic wording and how u employ it poetically. Kamikaze and scimitar and others. And the floral mentions delight my poetic heart. Fantastic epic so enjoyable. Kudos. . Soo nice to read from your pen again. I luv interaction in this cold world, Pleez add your thoughts/comment to my newest poem too, or this world feels too robotic ah,.
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 5/7/2018 5:44:00 AM
Hey Zaynab, cool to have you back on my show. Off ourse I will reciprocate. Thanks for the compliments
Date: 5/6/2018 6:08:00 PM
wow, what a colorful and exuberant poem, Jannie. Loved seeing this one. Dear Caycay really loved it too. I think I shall fave it also!
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 5/6/2018 11:16:00 PM
That is marvelous Andrea. Thank you
Date: 5/6/2018 1:33:00 AM
I'd love to paint this poem, that's how beautiful it truly is...x
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 8/12/2018 6:52:00 AM
what does your blue look like I wonder
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 8/12/2018 6:51:00 AM
when I was a kid I used to love walking barefoot through warm wet bull shit on the sugar cane farm burning fires snakeskins shed hanging from the verandah beam jasmine perfume bled. Perhaps I should. Write a poem.
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 5/6/2018 4:48:00 AM
Admission here: I am colourblind but I can imagine what you see. Write a poem about it too. For me,strangely bizarre,, who can tell me what blue looks like? But its MY blue. Everyone else is bullshitting ha ha
Date: 5/4/2018 7:58:00 AM
I am dizzy, so dizzy from all the reactions taking flight in my head as my spirit spurns on even more that I had to pause before even typing this much. Jannie, this is exceptional, its beauty is a raw uniqueness that is totally from the divine depths of your individuality. It defies form, goes in no box for its imagery is rolled out in a blow-me-away-Jannie-spell. I am faving it. Reading it again and again, savoring it. Your muse wouldn't leave you be for overly long, eh? Love ... CayCay
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 5/6/2018 4:45:00 AM
You know me so well. I have an Afrikaans poem that I am going to post too. If this impreases you I hope it would others too. Thanks sweetheart. Like I said to Leaane above, joy comes from inside. Bugger the outside.
Date: 5/2/2018 11:51:00 AM
Such a cerebral butterfly journey this glistening winged poem took us on, Jannie. Your pen is full of sumptuous ink ... Gagged nocturnally - blindfold humility. Rejected by those mocking moths and jealously believing left the key. Thought provoking lines throughout this gorgeously expressive poem, my dear friend. Love and joy always.
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 5/2/2018 12:54:00 PM
Ah another beautiful friend comes. Freddie its because you loved my glow worm so much that I got stuck on the insects again. Thank you so much
Date: 5/1/2018 3:31:00 PM
Jannie, this poem is a beautiful journey into transformation, a metaphor for a soul's transformation as well, into the spiritual calm realm of serenity. I love every aspect of this poem, so eloquently written. It is inspiring and it is going into my faves! I hope you are well my friend. I have been blessing yours and your countryman's frightful siuation for Divine intervention. Much Love and Blessings, Connie xxoo PS I am doing well after my knee replacement surgery, just recouping. ; )
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 5/2/2018 3:28:00 AM
Dark forces are flush our country down the sewer but God is doing miracles and His divine outcome will come
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 5/2/2018 3:25:00 AM
Oo Connie, I am so happy to hrar from you! I happy that your knee op went well. Apologies for not being in contact yet but I am inundated with stuff still. Soon I will be back I hope and thanks for being on my show. You gals are constantly in my thoughts.

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