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The Burden of Being

All day the wind has tormented the trees, causing branches to whip and bend. There is an anger let loose, loud in its haste to rip and destroy what is vulnerable. Spider webs woven last night are torn, flowers are plucked of petals and the wind chime has been strangled by its own chord, choked of its sound. But nothing is intended. It is I who have interpreted the scene and set language the task to frame nature in human terms, give the mechanics of a clock the power to decide the tick of its own time. All is mindless motion, unfolding to laws deaf to the pleas of mercy, revenge or want. Even the cry of a hungry child dissipates in the distances of space. It is us who bear the burden, weighted with a sense of right and wrong, bound by compassion, torn by doubt and despair, we, born into the tumult of evolution, are endowed with the gift to transcend our station through love, dissolving into the infinite.

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Date: 5/17/2024 9:59:00 AM
Dear Paul, another wonderfully written poem from your talented pen full of astute observations as always. Love how you describe the wrath of the wind destroying fragility and then continue with your own deep contemplations,’ It is us who bears the burden weighted with a sense of right and wrong’. How true! We are part of life’s existence and have a great responsibility to uphold. If only everyone thought the same then we would be in a much better and safer world. Always enjoy, admire your
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/18/2024 2:00:00 AM
Thankyou so much Christina for your generous comments...quite overwhelmed. Honored that you found the poem meaningful and thought provoking...your feedback very much appreciated and has made my weekend even more enjoyable. Take care...
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/17/2024 10:00:00 AM
thoughtful, intelligent thoughts so wonderfully expressed in your amazing poems dear Paul. Thank you for sharing, Have a wonderful weekend :)
Date: 5/16/2024 5:05:00 PM
what a powerful poem, Paul. It found it thought provoking as I ponder if by choice I create my own reality regardless of the circumstance I find myself in. That transcendence is a wonderful gift. As Dilly said, your scenes were compelling filled with descriptive words and phrases. This poem is a cut above and I thoroughly enjoyed it. have a great evening, Sara
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/16/2024 11:04:00 PM
Often my poetry takes me into places of contemplation, face to face with the big questions. Not sure if I resolve anything but a few lines of poetry is a good outcome for me. So appreciative of your comments dear Sara.
Date: 5/16/2024 11:31:00 AM
What a journey! So many descriptions of compelling scenes with such exact and perfect word choices. I'm not sure if there is anything you couldn't describe to invoke strong emotion. So much to contemplate when the journey is over and to easily overlay on much else where we assign meaning, ruminate unnecessarily, get invested in. Yet when you do it, it's mesmerising - another beaut
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Date: 5/16/2024 11:03:00 PM
I'd never say it if it wasn't 100% true Paul - that's why my friends are thrilled when I compliment them and ask me if they need an honest answer
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/16/2024 10:59:00 PM
Wow !. What can I say but a sincere and heartfelt thanks for your generous words DD. Not sure if my work is so deserving but it certainly takes on an additional sheen by bathing in such keen support my friend. Take care...
Date: 5/16/2024 10:52:00 AM
Beautiful descriptive poetry Paul, and I totally get the picture you paint, if we weren’t around to observe these natural phenomena, they would be meaningless, so leads me to the ultimate conclusion, sentient consciousness creates reality, what a burden to bear, but also a gift and a great topic to ponder through poetry, Top poem, cheers David
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/16/2024 10:33:00 PM
Thankyou David for your engaging comments. Do agree with your conclusion...played around with that idea for some time and it increasingly makes more sense. We are participants in the act of creation, collapsing reality into the now through observation, share in the responsibility for its existence. Value your comments and profound thoughts my friend.

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