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The Bubble Burster

In my days of innocence, a man- more a fantasy of flesh and blood- came unexpectedly along and stepped inside my little bubble. At last we had our moment. His mouth on mine, pillow soft, moved strangely out of synche with my own lips, and this was the pin that burst my bubble. for PD's Contest: free verse poem. (15 max lines)

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  1. Date: 3/29/2014 9:08:00 AM
    Andrea Such a passionate, romantic, innocent, and lovely write. The "innocence" of that kiss can do all kinds of things to someone. Thanks for the great comment on my Yellow Treat poem. No I didn't enter the Yellow contest. I didn't have a poem for that one at the time. Hugs

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 10:37:00 PM
    Beautifully cute and delicately suggestive. Nice poem. - Red

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 11:49:00 AM
    very nice write, and you won with it. That says it all ;} thanks for reading Rabbit Hole, the guy "Mark" did about 30 challenges. So I'll post the others sooner or later ;}

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 10:11:00 PM
    An out-of-sync-kiss will do it every time. Congratulations on your win! Jack

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 2:13:00 PM
    Creative write the analogy between our hopes being a bubble. Many bubbles pop before we find the one that won't. Awesome title as well. Congrats on your big win! Hugs

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 6:27:00 AM
    So many things can burst that bubble but the kiss is a clincher. Congratulations on your win. Take care, Regards Richard

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 7:42:00 AM
    Congratulations Andrea on your most deserved win....Donna

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 7:33:00 PM
    Thanks for the tender moment. Loved it! RAY

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 6:58:00 PM
    My hearty congratulations on your win my dear friend Andrea! Cheers! Thank you also for sharing this gem of yours! love and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 10:04:00 AM
    Creative metaphor Andrea, love the spin on the bubble. Congrats

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 9:15:00 AM
    hmmm a romantic kiss...very creative!! super congratulations my friend Andrea on your grand win!! you deserved it..big hug from me, Maria :)

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 8:31:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Andrea . That first kiss is dud or wonderful. xxAnne

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 8:28:00 AM
    wonderful! such an offbeat and creative use of "busting one's bubble" - love it!

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 6:57:00 AM
    Nevermind the limerick comment. I got my poems mixed up.

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 5:57:00 AM
    POP! Great win Andrea! I don't even remember entering this one...but I guess I put a limerick in...hmmmm

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 9:39:00 PM
    An interesting write. Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 8:50:00 PM
    Congrats on your poem and first place

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 8:23:00 PM
    Congrats Andrea on your great poem reaching new heights, xxx

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 6:40:00 PM
    Hello Andrea, another nice winning poem... congrats~ PD

  1. Date: 10/21/2011 8:14:00 AM
    ,Good morning,~ Andrea ~ how are you this wonderful Friday :-) morning... As for me, I'm missing everyone I know here on the soup PLUS more..((glad they are back)).Stopping by to read a couple of poems, after being shut out for them awful few days..ENJOYED YOUR POEM, thank you for sharing! Take care and have yourself a wonderful Friday~ ;-) Always,..p.d.