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The Brook Writes Its Blue Dream

Its fragrance,its aroma may be felt by the windy,hilly, naked rose. Sometimes it flows so sweetly, so brightly,to dominate its darkness. Its enduring,lonely aroma is the fragile,brittle mirror of an abyss. Its shadow is frequently the ragged,craggy saw-toothed lily. Marky or not,the brook usually crosses the devastating cliffs,sipping the invincible sky. If we infuse it with dusty grassy tears ,it'll be a formidable task. The searing joy sounds an unflinching,iron bird. Its scarlet transformation sparkles with a torrential,stony sunrise. Every stride echoes in the chambers of the flowery star. Every smile,every glimpse holds a hiden truth.

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Date: 2/27/2024 2:42:00 PM
Hello Mulu, This poem made me feel llike i was near a brook. Blessings my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/8/2024 11:12:00 AM
Hello Mulu,Y ou are welcome my dear friend. /Darlene/
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Mulu Magdalinos
Date: 2/27/2024 3:05:00 PM
Hello Darlene,thank you,my dear friend. Have a blessed afternoon.
Date: 2/20/2024 4:03:00 PM
I will later soupmail you. I am on my phone right now and am bad with copy and paste
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Date: 2/11/2024 8:57:00 AM
An awesome ending on this one. I loved the image of sipping the invincible sky. So poetic
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Mulu Magdalinos
Date: 2/11/2024 9:45:00 AM
Hello Andrea,thank you.Have a wonderful day.
Date: 2/4/2024 3:40:00 PM
Hello Mulu, Wow! This is a great poem. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/5/2024 10:42:00 AM
Hello Mulu, Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Mulu Magdalinos
Date: 2/5/2024 2:44:00 AM
Hello Darlene,thank you. Have a blessed week!
Date: 2/3/2024 11:09:00 AM
absolutely excellent poetry..
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Mulu Magdalinos
Date: 2/3/2024 12:14:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 2/2/2024 11:58:00 PM
Wow this is beautiful
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Mulu Magdalinos
Date: 2/3/2024 12:11:00 PM
Thank you!

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