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The Broken Paradigm of Love

The scent of a rose flower attracts a far off bee The sight of a rose flower carries away the ladies attention A gift of a rose flower sends her heart’s affection She was the rose flower I treasured in my life Rosy I called her to mean the beauty of the rose flower Rosy’s affection brought satisfaction and joy in my heart A second spent with Rosy was a dream awakening moment Rosy went, Dreams vanished Rosy you were my light in total darkness The morning star that shone my life’s mission and vision Rosy, Young Peats found his life purpose in you Rosy went, Young Peats lost his vision Rosy Rosy Rosy; where did your tenderness disappear to? Rosy Rosy Rosy; you left me void and empty, staggering with no one to lean on Rosy Rosy Rosy; you deep buried my future dreams Rosy Rosy Rosy; where did you vanish to?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/25/2016 6:30:00 AM
Hi, Young Peats, nice to hear from you, if you post a new poem. Let me know...hugs...Linda
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Date: 2/24/2016 6:33:00 PM
YOUNG PEATS, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 2/25/2016 6:24:00 AM
Thanks a lot for the complement, I appreciate Interestingly, it was my first poem to ever write...will keep writing.
Date: 1/3/2016 11:59:00 PM
YOUNG PEATS, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
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Date: 2/25/2016 6:28:00 AM
Hug Hugs Hugs too....I appreciate. Thanks for the comment

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