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The Broken Heart

I fight off the shadows, that feed off my heart, they bite it and scratch it, they tear it apart I grab some pieces, and put them together, they go in my chest, and they stay there forever I look for more pieces; they're all through the world, they can only be replaced, by the love of a girl but i'm still lonely and my heart is still bare, I scream and I cry, but no one does care Untill the girl walks up, her love I can taste, she looks at me, with a smile on her face She says she loves me, and that I believe, now my heart will be whole for eternity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/1/2011 9:16:00 AM
that was my ex...........umn akward
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Date: 7/30/2011 2:27:00 AM
wow thats sweet!!! haha i didnt know i could inspire sumthin like that lol!!!
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Date: 5/19/2011 11:27:00 PM
Elija, one tough fight...,. and a very warm CONGRATULATIONS:-) !! on your wonderful featured poem of this this week. Take care and God bless,.. Linda
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Date: 5/17/2011 2:33:00 PM
I really loved this poem! Fantastic job(:
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Date: 5/17/2011 1:02:00 PM
I like the first stanza most because I have struggled with the same thing...I wrote a poem called "Questions" I think is the title...how questions and thoughts will ravish you and overpower you...consuming...anyways...I can relate...well done :) Shauna
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Date: 5/16/2011 5:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Elijah
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Date: 5/16/2011 12:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured write this week Elijah. Love, Carol
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