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The Broken Heart- Her Fatal Mistake

She smiles at two beautiful white doves Prompting her to pray to above Wondering will she ever find love Her heart continues to ache Pain so deep, she just can not take The doves fly into the sky Thinking she must be the reason why Alone she is getting ready to say her final goodbye Clouds creeping in… She begins to walk towards the lowering sun Dreaming of that day she thought she met the perfect one A young girl once ambitious and fun Her heart ripped into two Wishing for a simple fix, yet there is no strong enough glue Still walking towards the sun Ignoring what is about to come A pain far too much to take She chose to make that fatal mistake

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/7/2010 3:23:00 PM
Sad ...Love loss wrtie...Sara
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