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The Broken Cloud

When all feels bleak, or grey, sometimes a cloud will break and from within, the sun will fall like lightning, thus brightening; A colorful painting upon the meadows of one's wall. (April 02 2016)

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Date: 5/1/2016 2:07:00 AM
Nice metaphorical imagery J, spiritual sunlight!
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Date: 4/5/2016 7:57:00 PM
You have created a moving picture of the bleak to the brightening of the sun, beautiful canvas. Thank you for reading my " Sentinel" Hugs dear friend
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J. Tudor
Date: 4/7/2016 3:35:00 PM
Your words captured the essence of the image of the lighthouse to perfection. Thank you for visiting Eve. J.
Date: 4/4/2016 1:05:00 PM
This is a nice painting... I can see the colors.
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J. Tudor
Date: 4/4/2016 8:36:00 PM
Pashang, you are very kind , and I thank you for visiting. J.
Date: 4/4/2016 3:51:00 AM
Gorgeous brevity. Really creative the way you carry double meanings .... "like lightning, thus brightening;" "thus brightening a colorful painting" ... your organize your thoughts in a very intriguing fashion, my friend. Imaginative and optimistic.
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J. Tudor
Date: 4/4/2016 8:39:00 PM
Timothy...what can I say, your comments energize and always lift me UP! J.

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