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The Brightest Star

The Brightest Star Extending my arms, I arose I stood, reaching on my tiptoes to grasp the brightest star in the distance afar magical rainbow transpose Mystifying and strange happenings developing wings and rising excitement that astound I spread my arms spellbound embracing the star that is sparkling Magnificent glow in the night skies nearer the star I had to close my eyes the brighter it became I overcame the flame grasping a peace in my heart that defies Suddenly caressed like an infant experiencing warmth, reverent ambience of heaven my eyes slowly open in the Lord’s loving embracement With His profound loving presence bound to believe my continuance life affairs imperative I need to go back and live with Lord blessed strength and endurance 5/2/2015

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Date: 5/22/2020 10:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your, "The Brightest Star," was a Brightest Write. Beautiful. Enjoy your win and day......
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Date: 5/21/2020 5:48:00 PM
Eve, terrific rhyming. Congratulations on your first place finish.
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Date: 6/25/2015 7:55:00 AM
Beautifully Penned Eve.
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/25/2015 9:51:00 AM
Thank you, Shonima, for your joyful visit bring wonderful compliment. Hugs Eve
Date: 5/3/2015 9:12:00 AM
Gorgeous piece!
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/3/2015 10:54:00 AM
Thank you, Rick, :~)
Date: 5/3/2015 2:27:00 AM
good pen Eve hugs 7
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/3/2015 10:54:00 AM
Thank you, Shadow, :~)

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