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The Bright Room

standing in your room lights too bright to see your smile though I can feel it broken from your doom sights too trite to see your style though I conceal it Written By: Laura Loo Date Written: April 26, 2016

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Date: 4/26/2016 10:41:00 AM
beautiful but sad LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/26/2016 11:38:00 AM
thank you lovely lady :)-luloo

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