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The Bridge of Hope

At the foot bridge, I linger; an hour goes while again confronted I am with foes. Deterrent are they, none but my own doubts; each from imagination of mine, again sprouts. Holding my feet once more in grips of iron, forbidding me those dreams of life that beckon. Sad, I stare at grass greener on the other side, longing as yet for courage to leave all aside. To this bridge of hope, surely I will come again to cry over lame failures in this one bargain! Re-submitted 24/09/16

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Date: 7/25/2016 5:53:00 PM
Nice one. And I agree with Victor. It's an emotive piece which makes it so nice.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/26/2016 12:01:00 AM
Thanks Andrea. I'm glad you enjoyed it. So many times we are confronted with the dilemma to cross or not to cross...fate...:) Sunita
Date: 7/22/2016 10:58:00 AM
Lovely poetry, Sunita.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 7/22/2016 10:46:00 PM
Thanks Daniel for going through. :)

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