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The Bridge

I walk towards you, as you stand waiting at the center of the bridge. Beneath my feet, aged timbers span the churning river below. With each step I see you more clearly. My eyes search out the younger you, that wild child with chestnut hair. I can still remember your pigtails and ear to ear grin. Back then, laugher was such an important part of us. Somehow, thankfully, from the start, we just seemed to get each other. As I approach, I see both of us in your eyes. The twinkles hidden within the wrinkles, laugh lines, the evidence of our pleasure. As you open your arms we embrace. For a moment, time relinquishes its dominion. Two friends once again, occupy a sacred moment, grieving and celebrating the passage of everything. We wonder, what if anything can be reclaimed? Together, wishing yesterday forward! The bridge groans under our childlike expectations. In a split second everything changes! We place young hands on the bridges revived splendor. Amazed, we look over its railing. There below, the river reverses upon itself, flowing backwards until it stops. The glass like surface reflects back images of our younger selves. I look back into your eyes with wonder, how is this possible? Once again we are both twelve, standing on this baby blue bridge. You too look shocked, What is going through your mind? Age has loosed its shackles! The years reeling back like hands on a sprung clock. I think my eyes deceive me, but it is you. A cowlick sticking straight up and you have that crooked smile. Your blue eyes playfully daring me, to follow you into a new adventure. This adventure occupies the reaches of our imaginations! Your hand rests beside mine, it feels familiar and safe. How I have missed you my friend, missed your voice, your exuberance for life. As twilight lingers and the stillness of time settles about us, I see us as we were. Long ago we said our goodbyes on this very bridge. We promised one day we would return to this very spot. A pinky swear magical promise! Then we waded into our unknown years. The river of time split us in two directions. Many escapades, broken hearts, triumphs and horrors. Somehow, we grasped at the memories of a forever friendship. A phone call, a transformative whisper, beckoning us to return, to a bridge, to a time, to a feeling. Twelve years old, hands clasped and swinging. We skip to the beat of our own accordians. . Together we dare life to give its all. We are ready once again, for skinned knees, adventure, perhaps some heartache, but mostly belly laughter and ear to ear grins! Written in collaboration with Monterey Sirak. It is a pleasure to work with such a talented poet.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/17/2015 10:38:00 AM
I like how your poem looks forward as it nears the close... It gives a nice sense of how we should all be optimistic in our endeavours. 7. Julia, with my very best wishes.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/17/2015 11:08:00 AM
Thanks Julia. ;0)
Date: 5/29/2015 11:58:00 AM
An incredible collab, Richard! I read the poem on Monterey's page and had to comment on your page, too...the two of you write beautifully together. I'm going to find and read your other collaboration now. Hugs, Rhonda
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/17/2015 11:09:00 AM
Thanks Rhonda, somehow I missed your thoughtful comment.
Date: 5/23/2015 8:03:00 AM
out standing pen Rick love, love it hugs 7
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/23/2015 9:02:00 AM
Thanks Shadow, this took a lot of back and forth but I am pleased with the end result.
Date: 5/20/2015 9:01:00 AM
Hi Rick, Sorry I got sidetracked the last couple of days and haven't posted our poem yet, but I will. I got into a writing jag and couldn't put down my pen. I read your replies here, it seems everyone agrees we do well when we let our pens ramble and play together.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/20/2015 9:04:00 AM
I agree Monterey, it was a pleasure.
Date: 5/20/2015 6:44:00 AM
We now await Part 11...amazing write...Congratulations to you and Monterey Sirak as Andrea said, A Masterpiece....
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/20/2015 6:46:00 AM
Thanks Judy.
Date: 5/19/2015 3:59:00 PM
OMG, with Monterey, my fave free verse poet! You two have created a masterpiece. FAVE, Richard. This is the kind of collaborative work I adore reading.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/19/2015 8:30:00 PM
This is our second poem together, the first was One Thousand White Butterflys. Thanks for faving it.
Date: 5/19/2015 3:24:00 PM
Excellent done both of you, this poem was painted with vivid imagery........7! And a fav.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/19/2015 8:31:00 PM
Thanks for visiting and for the 7 and faving it.
Date: 5/19/2015 10:44:00 AM
Believe me, this is one of the best collaborations that I have ever read! Two hands holding the same pen! The content excellent; the memories forever fresh. Well done Richard & Monterey! Top rating to you. // paul
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/19/2015 8:39:00 PM
Thanks Paul, you are very kind.
Date: 5/19/2015 10:05:00 AM
Richard you both did an amazing poem it is so beautiful and thanks for visiting my poem today and I have changed the title
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/20/2015 7:46:00 AM
I'm pleased you enjoyed it.
Date: 5/19/2015 8:38:00 AM
What an awesome collaboration Richard. This piece painted a vivid picture, thank you for taking me (the reader) on this journey.. Enjoyed every line :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/20/2015 7:48:00 AM
I am pleased by your reaction to the piece Wilma.
Date: 5/18/2015 10:33:00 PM
Nicely done to the both of you. I like the imagery in this one -JT
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/19/2015 7:13:00 AM
Thanks J.T.
Date: 5/18/2015 10:39:00 AM
What a splendid collaboration. Like Kelly, I didn't notice this is a collaboration until I saw the footnote. Twelve being the kids' age can't be more perfect for that time of innocent friendship. Congratulations to two very talented poets! 7.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/19/2015 7:14:00 AM
Thanks Kim. I also appreciate the 7.
Date: 5/17/2015 11:22:00 PM
What a wonderful poem this is! I had no idea that it was a collaboration until I read your last two lines. Beautifully written, Monterey & Rick!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/18/2015 8:25:00 AM
Thanks Kelly, I enjoyed writing this one with Monterey.
Date: 5/17/2015 7:27:00 PM
What can I say, awesome collab!!!!!!!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/17/2015 9:29:00 PM
Thanks Arthur.
Date: 5/17/2015 3:34:00 PM
The two of you are awesome together Well done and with feeling Love Mom
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/17/2015 6:39:00 PM
Thanks mom.
Date: 5/17/2015 2:23:00 PM
tremendous show of joy from you and Monterey... this one is a wonder!.. huggs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/17/2015 6:40:00 PM
Thanks and a big hug back.
Date: 5/17/2015 1:16:00 PM
Lots of happy feelings in are wrapped up in the lines of this poem, Richard. Monterey is a very talented poet...as are you. The produce? Sweet! Great write. Wish we could all go back to a simpler sweeter time. Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/17/2015 6:44:00 PM
One of my favourite movies is cocoon, the wonderful recapturing of youth.

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