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The Bridge

As I stand tentatively on this ledge, I begin to wonder if they'll bother to dredge. I doubt it,with a river so wide, not for yet,another suicide. Then I contemplate the rivers depth and how it undoubtedly will steal my breath. As my legs begin to tremble, I look back at how my life did resemble. As I'm thinking of my final seconds, a hand,quite close, waves and beckons. I go to jump and end it all but something grabs me and stops my fall. Several saviours are now pinning me down. Why did they stop me? I wanted to drown.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/14/2014 1:15:00 PM
This poem has a very strong message. Short but to the point. A lot of depth packed into a little poem.
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Jenny Brewer
Date: 5/14/2014 1:30:00 PM
Thank you Olivia,
Date: 3/28/2014 10:17:00 PM
Loved this one, have you heard of the film " A girl on a bridge? I wrote one along the same lines based on this film http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=491834
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Jenny Brewer
Date: 3/29/2014 4:56:00 AM
Thank you Arthur,I have not but I shall look it up.
Date: 3/3/2014 5:06:00 PM
wow Jenny that's so sad but such a strong message. a fabulous write. Jan x
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Date: 3/2/2014 7:10:00 PM
Thank goodness for the saviors....Excellent write on the subject Jenny.....Hugs Tim
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Date: 3/2/2014 5:38:00 PM
Inspired by a 2006 documentary about people who committed suicide at the Golden Gate Bridge in 2004.
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Date: 3/2/2014 5:26:00 PM
Contemplation of suicide is a terrible thing. You have described the common personal feeling pervasively well here.
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Jenny Brewer
Date: 3/2/2014 5:39:00 PM
Thank you Robert ,I appreciate all your comments.

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