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The Breeze and I Plus a Thank You

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This poem is dedicated to that kind person who donated me with a Premium Membership. I did not expect it but my grateful thanks comes with a wish of a happy and healthy New Year. The breeze whispers in my ears: ”Come and join me in a spree Let's move out towards the sea Over choppy waves on currents adrift, See your boat is in full speed, My strong breeze has filled your sails And speedily all is glee. The hot air on the beach is far behind, For now it's all fresh and clean. Dolphins jump out of the waves, Spraying droplets all around, Till down again they go towards the deep. Is it not a wonderful sight to see?”

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Judy Ball

Date: 1/5/2021 8:26:00 AM

I'm so surprised Victor that you were not I too thank this kind person for the lovely gift. You are a fine poet and deserve it. This is lovely as always and yes it is truly a wonderful sight to see dolphins playing in the sea. I love them . God Bless, JB

Judy Ball

Date: 1/5/2021 8:26:00 AM

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/3/2021 5:16:00 PM

Hi Victor, Bless the kind person that gifted you with a Premium membership. Because your talent is amazing, my friend:-) Alexis

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/1/2021 6:38:00 AM

Bless that kind person who recognized your talent and bless you for this light-hearted poem Victor! I can feel the salt-breeze and long for the freshness-a fave for me. :) Linda

Angela Crabtree

Date: 12/30/2020 8:42:00 AM

Yes, it is a wonderful sight to see. A wonderful poem, Victor and a wonderful person that gave you the gift. Hope you have a great day :)

Jan Allison

Date: 12/29/2020 5:40:00 AM

oh what a beautiful poem and such wonderful news Victor. I too know there are some true angels about on the site who bring such pleasure with these 'gifts of words' and yet remain anonymous. I am so happy for you :-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/29/2020 5:02:00 AM

A wonderful dedication! Yes, my dear friend, so glad you received a deserving gift!

Ann Gilmour

Date: 12/28/2020 11:21:00 PM

I can feel the sea spray on my cheeks Victor such wonderful imagery my friend. I love the sea so this is a FAV for me ~ thank you... with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Eve Roper

Date: 12/28/2020 11:04:00 PM

Love the imagery of this poem of thanks..Wonderful sir. Happy New Year.. Hugs Eve

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 12/28/2020 10:58:00 PM

I can almost feel the cool droplets and fresh sea breeze! I enjoyed the experience. Your gift was such a nice gesture. I'm happy for you. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2020 1:36:00 PM

Just beautiful, Victor!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/28/2020 1:15:00 PM

Ahhh!! Awesome that someone would gift you with that generous gift. I hope you enjoy it to the fullest. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Peter Dome

Date: 12/28/2020 12:07:00 PM

Love this so much. a dream of mine. off to an uncharted island. wonderful well done. Pete.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 12/28/2020 9:44:00 AM

A beautiful poem Victor.. So good to know and a wonderful gift. I loved these lines..,.'Dolphins jump out of the waves, spraying droplets all around'. God bless. Have a great day ~ Ani