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The Breaks

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The Breaks

my skateboard aint got no brakes.
aint that the breaks? neh im just great.
i got faith that angels negotiate 
the paths these vehicles take. 
insuring i dont get smashed
to many pieces and break.

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  1. Date: 11/22/2009 3:14:00 AM
    Fun you will have flying on by. Just keep your eye open for an out in case you need a safe place to fall. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 5/15/2009 11:07:00 PM