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"the Break Up"

when you are feeling hurt,sad,weak and lonely, just remember all the lies,secrets,cheating...he was always a phoney, take it step by step...one day at a time and be strong, right from the start and all the way through...you knew he was wrong, a beautiful baby boy came from this doomed romance, deep down it was always on borrowed time ...just like the very last dance, in time your broken heart will mend and there will be no more tears, then you will look back and wonder...why him leaving filled you with so many fears !!

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Skat A

Date: 1/30/2016 1:07:00 PM

LIZA, A great pleasure to find and read your pen today. Love -- SKAT --

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/11/2009 1:42:00 AM

I like your Poetry. I hope that this expresses what is happening in general not specifically to you. If it is, I will pray that God will send you the one. Sara

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 5/15/2009 6:44:00 AM

This is an excellent submission. I like the flow of the words and the message. Welcome to poetry Soup. ~Joseph

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 5/5/2009 3:06:00 PM

Beautiful poem... pls chop the lines after each coma. All the best.

Laurie Ginn

Date: 5/3/2009 4:07:00 AM

Two best friends just broke up recently and finally he was able to tell me he was ready to end it because he realised the woman he saw now is not the woman he married. God is healing this man as you say one step at a time. It nothing short of a miracle, he was so devoted. True poem