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The Break Up- Footle Contest

Cold stares heart tares

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/23/2010 6:55:00 PM

Well done Heather, nice footle. Very strong this really breaks it all,,, the hearts that is..Looks come 100 mile per hour, really enjoyed..Heather I looked for this poem,, (((Musical Mental Disorder))) I looked for it thru your poems in was not in their,,,lol,, I really want to read it,,did you post it,,,thank you,,Sidney LeeAnn= p.d.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 6/19/2010 8:02:00 PM

great one!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/19/2010 11:19:00 AM

Yes Heather the flow is much better and am glad u took it in the 'poetic' sense.. haha.. now to soup mail a poet here is what u do... go to the poet's list of poetry..click on a poem.. go to the top where your name appears: written by: ...... next to your name is a small icon ..click on that and the e mail page will appear ..then u just type away...make sure u are in the poet's list that u want to send.. u can send me a 'test' one if u like.. luv.. "Sweetheart"

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/19/2010 6:42:00 AM

Nice one Heather.. good luck in Brian's contest... thankxxx for your wonderful comments today on my poetry reads... SOUP MAIL in a few.. with luv.. Linda-Marie..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/19/2010 3:38:00 AM

A nice entry for the contest. Good luck