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The Brawl

Snapped down shirts, scuffed up boots Puffing larger than life chests Dime-store pokes, showing colors Peacock struts and sailor jokes Twangs from the jukebox Begging for two-steps Cheap draws flowing Cue sticks chalked and Propped on end. Balls on the felt waiting to roll in corners A quick spit, one more shot of Crow Then eyeing, sizing, and circling like Brigands in the woods, Angling the bank, then with a bend And swift slide of stick- One stripe in the pocket Quick tilt of hat, a strut and swell Another snap-click and cue ball falls Side glance and a snort One quick shove and the gloves are off Suds, fists, and blood Well hell... Another good night ends with "Last call for alcohol!"

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Date: 3/12/2016 3:23:00 AM
Nothing like those bar brawls before last call!
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Date: 3/10/2016 1:41:00 PM
Dang,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Dana Young
Date: 3/10/2016 2:16:00 PM
Thanks so much Linda. I appreciate that.

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