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The Bowl Aquarium

the bowl aquarium i can hear fish breathe with me beneath the ocean

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 4/13/2009 12:39:00 AM

Nature inside, intermingled with the human mind, and with reality to make man a part of nature. Hummmm it says a lot. Nice haiku.

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/13/2008 2:23:00 PM

Congratulations Ernesto on your win in Kristin's contest! Well done! Love, Shar

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/13/2008 7:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Kristin's contest Ernesto. Love, Carol

Katherine Stella

Date: 6/13/2008 7:20:00 AM

lol don't make me call you fish lips now my naughty boy lol outstanding write and imagery see even love can go below the surface lol keep on sharing my friend congrats on this being chosen in Kristens contest Ernesto

Brian Strand

Date: 6/13/2008 1:06:00 AM

Congrats on your success in Kristin's contest Ernesto.Rgds Brian

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 6/12/2008 4:45:00 PM

Congrats, Ernesto for your win in my contest! I loved this haiku - it is enchanting and vivid and awesome! thank you for entering it, well done! Love Kristin