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The Book of Life

It seems that time...is calling out my name As raindrops beat ..upon the windowpanes While scanning through the pages...of my life In a book...where empty pages...still remain What, I ask?...will be the final ending So many pages...so in need...of mending Now...with so little time to write the wrongs And find a title...for a cover pending Tattered pages...the story of my life A beaten trail...of harmony and strife A tale...more strange then fiction...in reflection With paper pages...cutting deeper...than a knife So many pages...yellowed by the years Words lost in faded ink...and salty tears As I read...and re-read...each page again With voices...from the past...ringing in my ears For years...I put these pages...on a shelf This endless quest for truth...to know myself Went on to write...so many poems of love And a book for children...all about an elf The past...I thought...I'd finally put to rest Thought I'd finally sent those demons...to their death But a restless wind...keeps calling out my name To write the ending...before my dying breath

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Date: 3/10/2024 7:11:00 AM
The lines are so captivating that they stir the inner core forcing us to ask 'What are we doing with our precious life?'
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Date: 1/16/2023 8:13:00 AM
I can only exclaim 'Wow' ! What a heartfelt writing, Elaine! "So many pages...yellowed by the years/ Words lost in faded ink...and salty tears". These lines clutch at my heart strings. Glad I could read this. This goes into my FAVE.
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Date: 7/8/2022 11:33:00 PM
"Pages in need of mending" on and on and on, you wow me with your play with words. Fantastic no wonder you were selected for the honor given you. Stay safe and well.
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Elaine George
Date: 9/22/2022 10:52:00 AM
Sorry for taking so long to reply to your much appreciated comment, dear Barbara.
Date: 6/25/2022 1:31:00 PM
Absolutely wonderful Elaine, enjoyed the read immensely. I read it top to bottom and bottom to top, both ways it’s an excellent write of the story of your life… Belle
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Elaine George
Date: 9/22/2022 10:56:00 AM
So Sorry for taking so long to reply to your much appreciated comment, dear Belle.
Date: 6/23/2022 11:14:00 AM
Wow Elaine, I really enjoyed your creativity! Excellent write.. Your talent shines, dear poetess.. Belated congratulations on your win! Many blessings..
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Date: 6/22/2022 6:34:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one. Since when we leave this world, we won't be able to follow up on what happens from then forward, we can never know what influences our life really had on it. Your presentation of the idea in this work was outstanding. Sara
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Date: 6/14/2022 1:33:00 PM
Your poem is outstanding, personally I believe it should have rated much higher, Thankyou for sharing your talent, and congrats, :)
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Elaine George
Date: 6/16/2022 4:51:00 PM
Thank you so much for your very kind, much appreciated comments, Rose.
Date: 6/13/2022 12:34:00 PM
A beautifully thorough rendering, Elaine, that is truly touching, and my compliments on your win, also, I am grateful for your visit my friend, Aloha~William
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Elaine George
Date: 6/13/2022 10:25:00 PM
Thank you, Hilo.
Date: 6/13/2022 10:00:00 AM
Elaine, CONGRATS on your win with this vividly expressive poem about those blank pages we still want to fill! Janice
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Elaine George
Date: 6/13/2022 10:26:00 PM
Thank you, Janice.
Date: 6/13/2022 8:09:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... so wisdom-filled. God bless you.
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Elaine George
Date: 6/13/2022 10:26:00 PM
Thank you so much Beata.
Date: 6/9/2022 1:28:00 AM
Your poem captures how so many of us feel as the winter years approach. I was able to relate to every line in this marvelously expressed Rubaiyat. I hope you are writing a book of your poetry and I hope this poem will be in it. I am Faving it my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Elaine George
Date: 6/13/2022 4:05:00 AM
Thank you so much, Connie. I am currently working on a book of poems...a teaching tool entitled " The art of Poetry" which I will be teaching in late summer.
Date: 6/7/2022 11:54:00 AM
Well done and enjoyed! Aloha!
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Elaine George
Date: 6/8/2022 3:29:00 AM
Thank Rico, the D is gone.
Date: 6/7/2022 10:27:00 AM
A FAVE from me for your Rubaiyat--lovely tone and flow, Elaine. Your life story resonates in this form. Keep writing--ignore the restless winds.
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Elaine George
Date: 6/8/2022 3:32:00 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay. This mean so much to me.

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