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The Boat of Sadness

Hardship is a ship that sails from peer to peer it stop at every port; unloads buckets full of misfortune and fear. It dumps on tons pain and pounds of suffering and strife. It heaps on masses of agony and enough anguish to last for life. It unloads a gram of compassion, just to build up your trust. Then it piles on more grief and worry, and scores of sorrow and lust. The hardship is a ship that travels far and near, with its' bounteous cargo, in stormy weather or clear.

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Date: 7/25/2011 7:02:00 AM
Nice poem. Ive been on that ship many times.
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Date: 7/24/2011 9:23:00 PM
Very powerful, yet the arrangement is subtle. Nicely done.
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