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The Boat

As I look upon the darkened skies
Clouds so grim I wonder why

And as I drift, along the windswept shores
Raindrops, remind me, of what is soon to be

And the wrath of darkness, soon unleashed
Those clouds are heavy, ominous and grey
There is no good news coming today

And as Irish tales have come to be
the clouds all, have been swept to sea

There is a ray of sun, breaking through the storm
And the day may yet ,please the soul

Yet I know deep down, without a doubt
I'll get the shaft, and be tossed about

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  1. Date: 2/27/2013 5:56:00 AM
    very nice poem

    vaso Avatar arthur vaso
    Date: 2/27/2013 9:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much
  1. Date: 2/26/2013 10:12:00 AM
    '...I'll get the shaft,' a particularly British expression! Fabulous images and compelling word use. You certainly have a way with setting a scene... Best wishes, Keith

    vaso Avatar arthur vaso
    Date: 2/27/2013 9:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you very much Kieth, much appreciated
  1. Date: 2/24/2013 6:46:00 AM
    lovely poem my friend, sorry, ...Seren

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 8:55:00 PM
    HI, ARTHUR ;-) THANKS for the comment. I have a contest, called deep dark poem... Maybe you would like to give it a go with the deep emotions and comparison of the sea in this poem. I truly like the poem. I hope you check out my latest contest... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 3:42:00 PM
    I agree with Yanny- this paints a lovely picture. Thank you for sharing and also thank you for your kind words on my poem :) hugs to you!

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 5:59:00 AM
    I like the scenery of this, even the skies were dark but you succeed to wrap it into a beautiful piece :), well done Arthur :) - hug, yanny

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 10:51:00 PM
    Through the darkness of life..s deep waters ..There s always a ray of sunshine..even if tossed in the bottom of the ocean ..the sun rays reach the deepest of waters.I really like your poetry..and tnks for supporting mine:)Charma

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 7:49:00 AM
    LOL An optimistic poem??? I have quite figured it out! LOL BUT welcome to the Soup my good friend - Jack

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 4:59:00 AM
    Arthur welcome to the soup, I like this piece...David

    vaso Avatar arthur vaso
    Date: 2/18/2013 10:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you kindly sir :)