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The Boardwalk

The Boardwalk Whistles, jeers Unrelenting young men Ladies in swimsuits sigh while passing by Screams from the Wild Mouse Creaking ominously against summer skies What happens if it fails to make that turn? Spinning wheels, colorful trophies “Step right up and try your luck!” “Come on, Dad, it’s just a buck.” Children’s laughter Fun House draws a youthful audience Mom and Dad slurp snow cones outside Buzzing overhead Plane with trailer invites diners: “Sample succulent fare at Oyster Pad” Honking trams Make room for commuters Who heckle pedestrians Pounding surf Lovers entwine beneath the wooden planks Whispering promises of eternal affection Cooing pigeons Stalk the waffle stand Wings flutter when bounty’s found Yawning toddlers Mothers cradle in their arms Dads wearily tote huge, stuffed bears * for the Sounds of Summer challenge

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Date: 1/29/2011 9:28:00 PM
You could be describing several different places along the New Jersey Shore with this entry. Wherever this place is, you have described it well with your words.
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Date: 6/6/2010 5:21:00 PM
What a grand trip you have escorted us on in this descriptive ensemble of sights and sounds,Carolyn! congrats to you! thank you for your much welcomed comment. Have been going through a serious dry spell of late...but will probably not be for much longer I hope. God love you. Robert
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Date: 6/3/2010 11:35:00 PM
Really nice, congradulations, brings back memories. thanks
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Date: 6/3/2010 3:24:00 PM
Carolyn~ Congratulations on your win in my Sounds of Summer contest! Love Laura :0)
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Date: 6/2/2010 9:42:00 PM
Great job, makes me feel like I am right there. Congrats!
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Date: 5/23/2010 6:22:00 PM
This is so excellent! I lived in Brighton Beach, NY once. On my way home from work, I would get off the subway at Coney Island and walk the boardwalk back to Brighton Beach. It was so amazing seeing the sights. I went back two years ago and took some pictures of where I used to live; then I sat on the boardwalk and fed the sea gulls. It was so much fun. This piece is memory refreshing. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 5/20/2010 8:31:00 AM
Great job. It seems your words have placed many readers on their favorite beaches and boardwalks. For me, it puts me at a Nathan's hot dog stand in Coney Island. This is a winner for sure in the contest. Joe
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Date: 5/19/2010 9:38:00 AM
I felt like I was at Wildwood Carolyn ! Great poem ! Great entry ! Who can't relate to this ? james
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Date: 5/17/2010 11:33:00 PM
Wow! For a second there I could smell salt water and I could have sworn I heard gulls screeching out the window here! Thank You Carolyn for the contest and all your wonderful comments. PS check out my poem "A Specter Speaks To War". I had to chop it in half due to the length, talk about breaking the meter! Anyway, the poem is my tribute to William Shakespeare and is a repeating Shakespearean. Sonnet X 6.
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Date: 5/17/2010 4:55:00 PM
Awesome Carolyn! Reminds me of VA Beach in the summer, or one of many places in Cape Cod. You sure did capture it perfectly.
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Date: 5/17/2010 4:28:00 PM
I love it , gives me inspiration to give it a go (I better take a little ponder, to recall "the Sounds Of Summer")Nice Nice!!!!!Thank you for enjoying my write for your lovers at twilight (silhouettes) blessing to you Carolyn!!is there another contest in the works??~~Rick
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Date: 5/17/2010 4:18:00 PM
So dear to my heart is your write Carolyn.. good luck in the contest.. u covered each sound so well... not leaving till tomorrow but just had to support my friend Irma.. in her first contest... thankxxx so very much for choosing "Promessa" as your 5th place winner today in the Sunset Silhouettes contest.. it was a photo that said so so much.. appreciate the win ..luv.. Linda-Marie.
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Date: 5/17/2010 4:14:00 PM
sounds like a date. for me and my new girl. i got her!!! john
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Date: 5/17/2010 4:03:00 PM
Sounds like a fun summer day at the beach with all those interesting people around..Keep the creative pen flowing...I included a picture with the write that you commented on Writerscafe.org...A picture from the morning showing the fog, clouds and rain.....I think when I got up this morning my hormones stayed in bed for I have been on the verge of being sick virus and feeling down...Sara
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Date: 5/17/2010 2:37:00 PM
such a dear and evocative write...good times! Light & Love
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Date: 5/17/2010 7:23:00 AM
Carolyn, reading your words. It was just like being there. Good luck in the contest >> James
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Date: 5/16/2010 5:46:00 PM
GREAt write!! You know it is an unsolved mystery on how Kramer gets his money and pays his rent. He is a mess but funny.
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Date: 5/16/2010 4:19:00 PM
You have soup mail. Charles
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Date: 5/16/2010 3:35:00 PM
So very picturesque, you sure have nailed this one. Well done. Love Heidie
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Date: 5/16/2010 3:13:00 PM
Very nice write, perfectly depicting the sounds of summer, Carolyn. Reminds me of the song, "under the boardwalk". Good luck in the contest. Best wishes, love, Caroline.
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Date: 5/16/2010 3:06:00 PM
light fluffy and very pleasant ... brings back a lot of memories; very well stated, thank you, chuck.
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Date: 5/16/2010 10:24:00 AM
I'm new here. How do I enter your contest without putting my name on my poem??????
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Date: 5/16/2010 4:25:00 AM
Lovely poem, Caroly! Wished I could be there...Best of luck in the contest! Thanks for your explanation what "Red Tide" means. Does the name come from red algae washed ashore? "The Modern Jazz Quartet" is well presented on youtube's music videos...Wishing you all the best...Love, Gert
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Date: 5/16/2010 4:01:00 AM
A wonderful poem with apt images. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 5/15/2010 10:09:00 PM
....holding, a stuffed and happy, blue eyed, with a silly grin, teddy bear for "You!" ~ "Very Lovely Write Dear Carolyn, Devonshire!" ~ "Love Always To You & Yours," John! ~ Smile, see you at the boardwalk---Bye:)
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