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The Blurry Line

A blurry line divides the road, You want to cross, but you don't; Skeptical of what lies ahead, A wonderland or a dead end. You wish to fly with your wings new-found, Weights of dilemma pull you down; You need to choose but you cannot decide, You're lost amidst what-if, if only, and might. Go ahead and dive into the sea, Forget your fears and you'll be free; You'll be the clouds and the rain, And the dancing waves as the moon wanes. There's magic in the wind if you'll believe, The world's not always what you perceive; The unsaid ciphers kiss your skin, While the doubts bind your bones within. Perhaps someday you will know, Miracles happen if you just let go; You'll be drenched with sparkling sunshine, As you cross the blurry line.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/21/2016 11:08:00 AM
Amrita Jha, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 10/24/2015 5:35:00 PM
Just love this, crossing into the unknown, takes guts, yours words help unlock the unknown...
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Amrita Jha
Date: 10/25/2015 1:11:00 AM
Thank you, we all need that strength sometime :)
Date: 10/24/2015 2:09:00 PM
Such a hopeful piece Amrita! A 7+ for sure!!!
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Amrita Jha
Date: 10/25/2015 1:10:00 AM
Thank you! Cheers :)
Date: 10/22/2015 2:12:00 AM
Hello Amrita! Apart from structural perfection, the imagery of this poem of yours is simply brilliant. You nicely ventilated the dilemma and anxiety playing havoc in modern minds... Also, you have given them courage to go and seek for... : "Miracles...let go". A brilliant poem.
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Amrita Jha
Date: 10/22/2015 6:00:00 AM
Thank you Tuhin for your detailed review, I'm glad that you liked it. It is very humbling to know that the message I had in mind while writing the poem got across. Thank you :)
Date: 10/20/2015 11:22:00 AM
Hello Amrita, I love the imagery and dive into the sea, crossing the blurry under the reflection of sunshine sounds pretty sweet... Love SKAT
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Amrita Jha
Date: 10/20/2015 1:26:00 PM
Thank you so much SKAT for taking the time out to read and review my poem, and thank you for the appreciation :) I'm glad the thought I had kept in mind while writing got across.
Date: 10/18/2015 3:04:00 PM
Nicely written. Keep up Anisha Dutta
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Amrita Jha
Date: 10/18/2015 3:06:00 PM
Thank you for the appreciation! :)

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