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The Blue Sky

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The Blue Sky

I was looking at the sky
and I saw something fly by

it was not a bird, it was not a drop of rain,
it was a butterfly flying around mundane.

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  1. Date: 1/17/2009 12:09:00 PM
    I really like the last line in this one--leaves the reader with something to think about. Much said in just four lines. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for taking time to comment on my poem. Keep on writing. Karen

  1. Date: 1/15/2009 1:33:00 PM
    Butterflies are marvelous creatures. You must really like them. Love Elizabeth

  1. Date: 1/14/2009 4:51:00 PM
    Great couplet, I like looking at the sky too. DN

  1. Date: 1/11/2009 7:15:00 PM
    Simple writings make for great poems, keep it up girl...Raul

  1. Date: 1/11/2009 10:47:00 AM
    Great writing and simply explained, sometimes its all we ever need is simple poetry. This touched me with butterfly and all. enjoyed reading and have a great day.