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The Blue Rose

Blue velvet was the rose gifted my heart. Poet was he and blue the blood from his thorn, a rose as blue as the summer skies a rose as blue as his ice blue eyes. Poet was he and blue the blood from his thorn. So gifted was he with the blue roses form. a rose as blue as his ice blue eyes, with thorns as sharp as his beguiling lies. So gifted was he with the blue roses form a rose as blue as the summer skies with thorns as sharp as his beguiling lies. Blue velvet was the rose gifted my heart.

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Date: 8/17/2011 3:23:00 PM
Had to get another taste of your writes Debbie...of course; a tremendous write for sure! Have a good one dear poet ! Much love, james
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Date: 7/19/2010 2:09:00 PM
This is so incredible writing. I love it You are truly gifted.
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Date: 7/3/2010 6:11:00 AM
The pantoum has always been my favorite poetry form. It fits so well with this topic! Enjoyed reading, and thanks so much for the kind words on my fireworks haiku :) Btw, I took your advice about the third-line period! I love it when soupers give me advice. Thanks again, Grace
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Date: 6/29/2010 9:54:00 PM
Hey I missed this one. IT's awesome! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/25/2010 4:12:00 AM
Congratulations Deborah on your win in Mac McGovern's contest "The Blue Rose" Love, Carol
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Date: 6/19/2010 9:51:00 PM
Hey TEACH way to go .. congrats on your big win in the Blue Rose contest with this glorious write and win.. enjoy.. see u in a little bit.. with luv pupil.
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Date: 6/19/2010 7:46:00 PM
Very romantic and beautiful. Ah!!! The magic in that blue rose. Congratulations. Love Joyce
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Date: 6/19/2010 6:49:00 PM
Deb, congratulations on placing 7th. Another unique and beautiful poem from the pen of a very talented poet.
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Date: 6/19/2010 2:44:00 PM
Those cunning and skilled romantic poets get us everytime. ...sigh I always fall for their tender words. Makes my heart flip everytime! Loved this one!
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Date: 6/19/2010 1:37:00 AM
This is very beautiful,gifted lady!Celene ma :)
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Date: 6/18/2010 7:23:00 PM
What a mesmerizing poem! really like how this flowed--the story you made out of it fit the "blue rose" so perfectly-- and I'm sure this pantoum will be a top winner :) --nikko :)
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Date: 6/18/2010 3:55:00 AM
Great write in this one...Should be in the winner's circle..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 6/17/2010 2:52:00 PM
Wonderful Pantoum Debbie! I'm having some trouble with my soupmail, but I really want to be assigned to #4 on your new contest Broad Horizons!~Tirzah~
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Date: 6/16/2010 5:59:00 PM
I have that song going through my head now.....'Blue Velvet'..... great poem Deb!! Ice blue eyes....thorns as sharp as beguiling lies....this too should be a song!! :) ps...another soup-mail on Lemonade! :)
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Date: 6/16/2010 4:58:00 PM
hey, I had the girl blue rose and you had the guy!! A magical pair. Very nicely done.LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/16/2010 3:23:00 PM
Dear Light and LOVE, Deborah, I Admire YOUR Talent I can not do this kind of Poem and have it make sense Good Luck in the Contest YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG SOUP MAIL CALL
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Date: 6/16/2010 10:32:00 AM
I feel your heart thumping, even at the simple, yet not so simple word "a" in this poem ! Wonderful write !In mine favz if you mind not james
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Date: 6/16/2010 10:13:00 AM
sorry for the delay in replying, i tried to enter the catch phrase and all but i cant find where to and it seems confusing. in case the contest is still open i would like "wash away rain" as the catch phrase for window o' heaven. if you could please enter that for me as i am unable to. thanks n love. rinki.
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Date: 6/15/2010 10:50:00 PM
Well done, Deb.! Great pantoum. I loved the style and flow. Good luck in the contest. XOXOX Dane Ann
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Date: 6/15/2010 7:51:00 PM
Well wel, With thorns as sharp as his beguling lies and what a nice gift of blue velvet. I predict a high place for you. Good luck, Deborah
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