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The Blue Danube

The old upright piano sits flush against the wall, has been hushed into silence, out on the sun porch Ignored, neglected, but standing erect I can imagine it was treasured in its prime,..polished, stylish, and new But age has turned the varnish yellow The veneer a bit buckled, the bench has been repaired with clamps, screws, and Elmer’s wood glue A relic from another time. Songbooks are still cradled, but pedals are disabled. We can almost hear its breath exhale, with tinny-rhythmic sighs Two white keys might stick,...and three or four are chipped... And tears, chopsticks, hearts and souls were spilled on ivory seas If only clocks could turn back time Mother sitting next to me, side by side, ... our worlds aligned Keeping the rhythm, over and over, measure by measure, ... playing together the “The Blue Danube”. ___ With her hands over mine, pointing out the key of C And what I can still see,...so clear in my mind.., are the blue veins of her hands enveloping mine, leaning into the waltz, a bit off key (It needed tuning…It always did. Never mattered. Never will) I was small. My fingers couldn’t reach them all, those pock-marked, scarred, and magic keys But the measure of Johann Strauss would bounce off the walls… She would hum into my ear… Her soft brown hair would mix with mine I could smell Breck shampoo, and feel her breath upon my cheek And feel the music, soft and sweet, classic light…from that old Upright... A simple tune…the waltz of time that has played on and on... long beyond her life and will play on long beyond my own __________________________________________________________

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Date: 8/8/2016 2:02:00 PM
So meditative and gently read -- but, why didn't you use the music from Blue Danube as the background? :-)
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Carrie Richards
Date: 8/8/2016 2:40:00 PM
Thank you Tom, I did think about it . I tried to download that music, but for some reason at the time, it wouldn't let me. Also, it was a little 'too lively' perhaps, for the nostalgia I was going for. So I settled on something more sedate. Thanks for the comment!!
Date: 8/6/2016 4:58:00 PM
The work takes one to such a peaceful place. Congratulations Carrie and thanks for sharing it with me...
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Date: 8/6/2016 3:15:00 PM
Beautiful nostalgic and heartfelt memories, Carrie so wonderfully imaged in your amazing poem. Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/6/2016 7:59:00 AM
I'm so glad this contest led me to this beauty. Your comment about Breck shampoo made me smile, I remember the commercials when I was a kid. I like old pianos, we have them throughout our city all painted in wild colours. In fact there is a Utube of Steven Tyler playing one of them in city park. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 8/6/2016 2:07:00 AM
Carrie, thank you so much for the lovely entry. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Stop by my blog "BOSSY COW." if you'd like, enjoy my sheer, simple madness. Hugs ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/29/2015 11:57:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your win. LINDA
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Date: 12/28/2015 10:37:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations in Judy Konos contest... wuv SKAT
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Date: 8/5/2013 5:12:00 AM
A stunning piece which really deserved its super win! CONGRATULATIONS my dear friend, Carie! And since somebody sent me a message, i'm passing it to you, Happy Friendship Day! Big sweet hugs! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 8/5/2013 1:43:00 AM
This is on utube?...Gotta watch that! I remember this gem of yours Carrie...Congratulations my friend - Tim
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Date: 8/4/2013 10:00:00 PM
Congratulations, nice winning list... goodnight~ Linda
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Date: 8/4/2013 5:02:00 PM
Carrie, this is very lovely... SKAT
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Date: 8/4/2013 2:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your amazing win
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Date: 8/4/2013 12:46:00 PM
- Carrie,YES it deserved a first place !!!!- CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/22/2013 3:54:00 PM
Whoa, the nice old days when we danced the waltz. Congratulations, Terry.
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Date: 5/21/2013 6:12:00 PM
Still a masterpiece, as I commented on YouTube. Well deserved first place!
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Date: 5/21/2013 12:45:00 PM
Just a wonderful walk down memory lane. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 5/21/2013 9:14:00 AM
Carrie this is a wonderful memory and I still rember the smell of that shampoo..congratulations...
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Date: 5/21/2013 1:20:00 AM
Many congratulations on another top spot Carrie love, well done xx
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Date: 5/20/2013 9:22:00 PM
Enjoyed this recollection between a mother and daughter. Congratulations on a stunning poem. SuZ
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Date: 5/20/2013 9:12:00 PM
beautiful memories......congrats on a greaT win
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Date: 5/20/2013 8:44:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie, enjoyed~ Linda
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Date: 5/20/2013 7:29:00 PM
OH CARRIE! I'm near tears...this is so so beautiful. A well deserved win, my dear. It brings back memories of my Mama whom I lost 13 years ago...their memories live on. I loved so much of this, but this line was really worded so beautifully...It needed tuning…it always did, it never mattered, it never will...it doesn't matter, because the tune in your heart is what matters, and that doesn't need tuning. Your Mama must have been a really special woman. Thanks for your post on my poem. Hugs!!!
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Date: 5/20/2013 4:50:00 PM
Wonderful, wonderful, happy memories. A great poem and win in this contest. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/20/2013 3:24:00 PM
Well done and congrats on your win and your fine poem.
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Date: 5/20/2013 2:32:00 PM
Gorgeous, Carrie, and I see you have even got it recorded. Dang, I wish I had more hours in my day so I could go hear my fave poets reciting their poems. congrats on your well deserved win.
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