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In the spring, I'm a Daffodill In many hues, dancing on the hill Swaying with the gentle breeze In the spring I'm easy to please In late spring, I'm pale pink rose Growing on the trellis, inviting bees toes To touch on me, drink their fill of nectar Sweet, in late spring I'm real neat In early summer, I'm Buddleia When Butterflies come, Cassiopeiae Is so jealous of the attention As they touch and tickle my extensions Later on I become Great Yellow Gentian At this time I'm in another dimension Waiting the time in the fall when I've lived all Then I become the great Sunflower in the fall When winter arrives, I'm barely now alive This is when Camellia makes her debut She is really now more alive leaves glisten They've a glossy waxy shin and the blooms pristine (In response to Andrea's Blog.)

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Date: 5/6/2016 1:26:00 PM
This poem just blossoms with vivid floral imagery, how lovely! And congratulations on your win in Andrea's favorites contest!
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Date: 5/1/2016 7:07:00 PM
Sara, Congratulations on your win in Andrea's fave contest. XOX - LINDA
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Date: 4/28/2016 10:02:00 AM
A 7, Sara! What a lyrical write! Congrats on being Andrea's fave!
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Date: 4/28/2016 7:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Adrea's Fave's contest, Sarah. It is only someone who can appreciate nature's beauty who can identify so closely with flowers!
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Date: 4/27/2016 12:01:00 PM
A 'blooming' lovely poem Sara :-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/27/2016 12:19:00 PM
Jan, Thanks for stopping by to say congrats..Sara
Date: 4/27/2016 11:01:00 AM
Sara, this is wonderful and you carry a beautiful flow with your pen congrats! :)-luloo
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/27/2016 12:12:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by and taking time to comment..It needs brushing up though..Sara
Date: 6/26/2010 5:56:00 AM
This is beautiful Sara, i really enjoyed the poem,,, and than you for the s.m. yesterday,,,Have a nice and wonderful day,..Sidney LeeAnn
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Date: 6/24/2010 9:03:00 PM
oh, boy, you may have beat me to the punch. ON a contest I was thinking of. hahaha. This is really wonderful, Sara. Hmmm, I'm gonna try to pretend like I did not see this, just in case I do that thing (and into favs too. hahaha)
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Date: 6/24/2010 5:05:00 PM
I enjoyed the floral arrangement! Thanks... Jeralynn
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Date: 6/24/2010 4:43:00 PM
come bloom in my garden, it is thirsty looking. How are you?
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