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The Bloom Fell Off the Rose

It was to last forever. But the Bloom fell off the Rose. It started great, however, the Bloom fell off the Rose. It shouldn't have started, but it did And the Bloom fell off the Rose. Now she is brokenhearted for the Bloom fell off the Rose He too has since departed while the Bloom falls off the Rose.

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Date: 9/28/2017 4:23:00 PM
Lovely but sad poem, Marilyn. My only suggestion would be to change your line breaks. Otherwise, a great little triolet.
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Marilyn Williams
Date: 9/28/2017 4:54:00 PM
Thanks for your reading and suggestions.
Date: 6/30/2015 1:06:00 PM
good write, thanks for your kind comments and support on my poems
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Marilyn Williams
Date: 9/28/2017 4:55:00 PM
My thanks of your appreciation.

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