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the blog wars hiding beneath and behind the tufted heads of the nine tailed cats awaiting the unsuspected entry of inane innocence at large devious despoilers – these demons perfections faulted protectors exacting a price they cannot pay holding an ideal as a weapon denying the truth of a single beauty because it stands among so many mocking the buds of beauty’s quest as inept imposters to the throne sticking the thorns of jealous roses into the hearts of blooming daisies hiding in the bulrushes of ego’s self inflating fallacy yet still intruders crash the gates bold interlopers plodding onward toiling in the trenches of a dream unfazed by guardians failing scheme John G. Lawless 10/12/2015 submitted to – Best October Poem – Poetry Contest sponsor – SKAT A

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Date: 11/23/2015 12:50:00 PM
Uniquely descriptive, John! I love your lines "sticking the thorns of jealous roses into the hearts of blooming daisies". Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 11/21/2015 6:30:00 PM
Congratulations John
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Date: 11/20/2015 11:37:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this superb poetry John!
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Date: 11/20/2015 11:00:00 PM
John, Congratulations on your wonderful OCTOBER win. I'm inviting you in hopes you enjoy my blog "I am the Pen" wrapping up October and its late winners :( Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Forever & Ever **SKAT**
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Date: 11/4/2015 3:40:00 PM
very timely and meaningful, john... splendid work!..huggs
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Date: 11/4/2015 9:01:00 AM
Definitely the best poem John - you put this so eloquently - - your poem says it all:-( good luck in the contest - think I may take a break from here hugs jan xx
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