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The Blizzard

My mother says I’m a blizzard She also compared me to a volcano And a tornado She said my room was like a hurricane And that my closet was so messy I might have a few Cadavers lying around in there Anyway—the storms? I noticed they’re all Massive calamities Uncontrollable forces of nature They’re destructive Haunting— Almost beautiful I like that idea: Being dangerous and beautiful But I don’t know if that’s exactly what she meant.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/5/2016 4:09:00 AM
stopping by to show some love, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. --SKAT
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Date: 4/22/2016 11:05:00 AM
awesome to read this one again, Margorie..linda
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Date: 11/16/2015 11:09:00 PM
Margorie, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/15/2015 5:58:00 PM
Hi Margorie, this is such an excellent piece that I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Date: 11/14/2015 9:41:00 PM
Ha-Ha, take it as a compliment. Margorie, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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