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my first attempt at limericks hope I got it right
The blacksmith while he was hammering did hit his thumb, oh boy how it stung dipped it in water got bit by an adder boy, he swore and swore at the aching

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/5/2016 9:37:00 PM
Haha, Blacksmiths get the first toast at any festival, for they use all four elements in their craft. 7 PAGES Shadow of poetry, wow! You are a prolific writer. And thank you for taking your time dropping by on lil olde me. :-) /|\
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Date: 5/30/2013 7:26:00 AM
- A fun and well done poem, Linda! - Pleased to read your poem today. - Wish you a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/30/2013 3:22:00 PM
ty glad you liked it 1st one I have done so I hope I got it right Linda
Date: 5/29/2013 7:30:00 PM
Ha....great write..enjoyed
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Date: 5/30/2013 4:23:00 AM
hi Donna pleased that you enjoyed it Linda
Date: 5/29/2013 2:07:00 PM
This was enjoyable to read. I felt the pain of it too. :) Nicely done!!!
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Date: 5/30/2013 4:23:00 AM
ty Drake yes so did I lol glad you enjoyed Linda

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