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The Blacksmith

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my first attempt at limericks hope I got it right


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The Blacksmith

The blacksmith while he was hammering
did hit his thumb, oh boy how it stung
dipped it in water
got bit by an adder
boy, he swore and swore at the aching

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  1. Date: 5/30/2013 7:26:00 AM
    - A fun and well done poem, Linda! - Pleased to read your poem today. - Wish you a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 5/30/2013 3:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty glad you liked it 1st one I have done so I hope I got it right Linda
  1. Date: 5/29/2013 7:30:00 PM
    Ha....great write..enjoyed

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 5/30/2013 4:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Donna pleased that you enjoyed it Linda
  1. Date: 5/29/2013 2:07:00 PM
    This was enjoyable to read. I felt the pain of it too. :) Nicely done!!!

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 5/30/2013 4:23:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty Drake yes so did I lol glad you enjoyed Linda