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Orange feathers in the warm air, Blackberries seem to be floating in a lair.  The dry season in June is bountiful,  A video that lives in the days of plentiful. Birds land with absolute elegance, Designed ice cream and blackberry grace.  Feed the frenzy; all hunger is quenched, Life-sustaining food in berries drenched. Scarcity and deprivation soon follow,  My ears perceive the winter ominous hollow. Every day they must contend with the weather,  In every form, I'm aiming for food and heather.  There are almost endless varieties of berries,  from speckled blueberries to gnarled blackberries.  The flavor matches the bursting thrill of a single cherry, But to fully grasp it, she has to relish it fully. I am longing for the end of the year, Until a rich, fresh life brings berries here.
Written: July 31, 2022 Your Thoughts On Blackberries Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Matt Caliri

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Date: 8/5/2022 8:21:00 PM
A lovely write/picture. Guess the birds eat first, then we will eat. Have a great weekend............
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Date: 8/4/2022 7:19:00 AM
Nice poem. I enjoyed this :)
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Date: 8/1/2022 9:01:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this write of yours Lasaad a wonderful entry for the Contest. Michael
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Date: 8/1/2022 9:16:00 AM
Thank you so much, Michael, I'm so glad you like it, and I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my poem.
Date: 8/1/2022 8:47:00 AM
Do you live in or near Africa as you speak of June and the dry season. Your topics that you choose emanate from your rich knowledge and creativity besides a fertile and vivid imagination. Hugs and blessings Lasaad, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/1/2022 9:16:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jennifer, I'm so glad you like it, and I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my poem.
Date: 8/1/2022 6:33:00 AM
Much merriment you convey in bounty of the season my friend. Best to you, Lasaad.
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Date: 8/1/2022 1:15:00 AM
Just before autumn hits us we gather the harvest and our patience is rewarded. Best of luck Lasaad and enjoy your week ahead. Tom
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Date: 8/1/2022 9:17:00 AM
Thank you so much, Tom, I'm so glad you like it, and I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my poem.
Date: 8/1/2022 1:14:00 AM
So true, I love berries, especially the black ones.
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Date: 7/31/2022 9:48:00 PM
Black berries are delicious fruits rich in vitamins ! Only if they are fully ripe, they give the desired taste ! As you have said, there are many varieties of black berries .
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