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The Black Tear

Black tinged tear dribble down in misery, now heart broken forever: bereft life. Will he turn back for her? Maybe relent? Forlorn she sat on the sofa waiting. 3 November 2020 Picture 2

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/25/2021 5:42:00 AM

Sad. I kind of doubt his return or it he does he stay put. Thanks for all the visits. Sara

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/13/2020 11:29:00 AM

Marvelous Tetractys, Victor. You paint such beautiful pictures w/words. Love and peace always.

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/8/2020 9:54:00 PM

Hi Victor, You painted a sad poignant picture in your well written write. Good job!Best wishes in the contest -Alexis

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2020 7:01:00 PM

hey we did different pictures but we had something or someone sitting and waiting on a sofa! I really like this. Let me see the other version.

Angela Crabtree

Date: 11/4/2020 4:34:00 PM

The beginning of the story well written, Victor. I enjoyed both part 1 and 2 :)

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 11/4/2020 1:23:00 AM

I should have read this one first! A meticulous poetic display of pain that reigns in the heart and rains from the soul reaching for a healing hand.. so beautiful what your poetry has narrated, Victor! A great delight to read! My warmest wishes. Regards and blessings.