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The Black Sea

Over land and sea bright stars twinkle reflecting memories back to me the warm breeze singing me tuneful melodies I crave the sullen hints of morning dew near dawn a playful harmony tasting the black sea sinking shoulders Caspian glows throughout The wide open granduer arousing the Indian Ocean capturing pure darkness eyes wide open arms out stretched welcoming this beautiful new day rising from the east melting the north star calmly comforting warm coastal waters of the west settled down within the midst of me

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Date: 3/4/2024 4:36:00 PM
Now I want to visit the Black Sea. I like the accompaniment of the other seas. You seased the opportunity to add them as organs or chakras in a sense of unity through harmony. Being a water sign I find it comforting. Being a poet, I find it brilliant. Nicely done, Yolanda.
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Date: 2/13/2024 1:14:00 AM
Lovely Yolanda flow very smoothly hugs Shadow
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 2/13/2024 2:51:00 AM
Thank you for your kindness many blessings.
Date: 2/11/2024 1:52:00 PM
Thank you for this poem of a gentle ocean. Water has so many faces. You captured this phase in beauty.
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 2/11/2024 2:33:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kindness many blessings.
Date: 2/9/2024 10:51:00 AM
Marvellous description of sunrise. Always a pleasure to read your poems.
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 2/10/2024 1:33:00 AM
Thank you so much many blessings
Date: 2/8/2024 5:09:00 AM
Dear Yolanda, I can almost feel the cool breeze of dawn on my skin, taste the dew's playful harmony, and sink into the vastness of the ocean. I love how you personify the sea, its "eyes wide open" welcoming the new day while the North Star offers a comforting presence. It is beautiful, thought-provoking poem. Your writing ignites the imagination and stirs the soul. - Blessings, Daniel
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 2/9/2024 7:08:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kindness Daniel many blessings.

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